Lightningmouse

“Ashlynn!” a voice shouts from behind. “Watch out for-” I’m knocked unconscious before the voice can finish it’s sentence.

Maybe here you could describe how the character was knocked unconscious more…for example, you could say, “I felt something hard strike the back of my head, and everything went black.” Or something like that. 🙂

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I got the same thing when I clicked on my name…

Also you say I asked Arthur which should be I ask Arthur. 🙂 And a little later in the last paragraphs you change completely into past tense. 🙂

Also you say I asked Arthur which should be I ask Arthur. 🙂 And a little later in the last paragraph you change completely into past tense. 🙂

@adry_grace
Very good! I did notice a few places where you switched from present to past tense. At the end of the second paragraph, you say I got up clumsily. Also you say we weren’t not sure which I assume means we aren’t sure. But anyway, great job!!!

Thanks, @kate-flournoy! 😀 I had that idea right after finishing the gingerbread part. I was just “YES I NEED TO DO THIS.”
Yay! I’m so glad you liked it, @jadamae! I love it when non fans still like the fanfiction. 🙂 Still, you should watch the show. 😛

@rolena-hatfield, It is a lot of fun. We actually have performances for the True Story of the Three Little Pigs this week! 😀
My favorite musicals are Les Miserables and Wicked. Do you have a favorite musical/show? Ooo, Mary Poppins! That sounds like fun. 🙂

@daeus I did it like you: I took the test from my MC’s perspective and I completely agreed with everything the description said.

@daeus I did it like you: I took the test from my MC’s perspective and I completely agreed with everything the description said. About my MC, I mean…

*slowly raises hand* I’m an S. That’s my most solid preference, actually. But I only know like one other S type writer, so your pattern is a thing, @daeus. 😛

You just gotta have that one stroke of creativity, and then BOOM! The whole world will proceed in a parade out of your mind and onto the paper. Of course, check for originality, always. But some people can create worlds in a few minutes. Others spend YEARS, maybe even their whole life. Maldroc was created over three or four months after a year of…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy
Cool! That’s actually somewhat along the lines of where I was going with Finnian, so that’s good. 😉

*covers Quinn’s ears* YES. Any… *ahem* suggestions for Quinn’s hardships? 😛

Okay, so my brother pointed out that it would be hard to have the ticking-time-bomb element be the colony’s lack of food without some sort of dip…[Read more]

@zoe-wingfeather
Yeah, it’s kinda new for me having it short. But it’s really fun. 🙂
So, what’s your favorite thing to write? I’m gonna go out on a limb and say fanfic is one of them… 😉

This is really weird. INFJs are supposed to be the rarest type, but they make up most of the people I know.
ENTJ, @hope? Cool! I didn’t think I knew any ENTJs. 😛

1. A spoilery death in Horatio Hornblower (KATE, COME CRY WITH ME)
2. Again, sacrifice. Literally the last thing on this character’s mind was himself. He was dying and he knew it, but was trying to not make a big deal out of it for his friend’s sake. He was his old, cheerful self right up to the end. *deep, calming breath* So, sacrifice,…[Read more]

1. Have you heard of/read/seen the Divergent series? They were OK books. In the last book, though, a character dies, and that’s probably the saddest death I’ve read in a book. I was literally bawling.
2. I think what made it so sad was that this character sacrificed her life so that her brother wouldn’t die. If the character dies for a noble…[Read more]

Okay… *cpr on topic*
So I’m plotting this one right now and I think I might know where I’m going. (Which I didn’t for the longest time because there were a million different directions I could take it.)
The questions I need you guys for are: Where would you expect this to go from here? And what would you be disappointed if I didn’t do?

I’m an INFJ-A…how interesting.