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@kate-flournoy
Wow; intense. I like it! 🙂

@bluejay, Well, you’d better hurry and make up the rest, or we’ll both die. XD Just kidding. 😛 😉

Thanks @ingridrd 🙂 Yeah, that’s what I was going for 😉 Haha

@faithdk
Wow, that’s awesome! I love it…I can totally visualize what’s happening. 🙂

Great prompt, @ingridrd! 🙂 Here’s the one I wrote…

Jessa crawled out from beneath her teacher’s desk, scraping her hands and knees against the broken glass that scattered the floor. She barely made out a tall dark figure emerging from the thick smoke that filled the classroom.
He reached for her hand.
A black mask covered all but his blue e…[Read more]

This was for the Writing Prompt with the girl on the step and the guy in black…

He couldn’t tell Rachel; he would leave without her notice. Her grief might make it harder for him to get away.
Jack slipped quietly out of the bed. His clothes and backpack waited for him on the chair. Grabbing them, Jack hurried out of the room. The hallway f…[Read more]

@writefury, YES! We should totally do that. 🙂

((Yeah, I’m going off Kate’s. Sorry @gretald, I just don’t know what I would have done with the window. I probably would have had her see something boring like a sock.))

His declaration does nothing to calm me down. Lovely. Two more burning questions. I didn’t have enough before.
I turn my gaze back on him, “What do you mean that only one of us…[Read more]

*nods* You have my forgiveness @kate-flournoy. (or should it be @dragon-flournoy?)

Aaaanyway. On the topic of the topic.
We should come up with titles for everyone. This needs to be a thing. I’ll make a logo.
@kate-flournoy needs something to do with dragons and @daeus needs something with the Count of Monte Cristo.
We’ll debate this more…

Perfectly normal for writer’s forums, @daeus. I should know. XD
In the meantime… @kate-flournoy… *wags finger disapprovingly* You should at least be polite if you’re going to turn into a dragon without warning.

Great job, @jadamae! 😀 I think the “as their ears with music teem” has a better rhythm to it in that line.
Kate and Daeus caught pretty much everything I would have pointed out (darn you fast people) so no other complaints here. 😛

Wow, this is beautiful poem, @jadamae. About the last line of the second stanza, I personally like “as her fingers with music teem” better, but they’re both beautiful.

@kate-flournoy, Good to know! I know I’ve said this before, but thanks for sharing your mistakes with us so we don’t make the same ones. 🙂 Congratulations on finishing your novel!!!!!

@kate-flournoy Yeah, totally get that. One thing I’ve started the habit of doing is keeping a list of all the little things that could become important later. Never just let it drop when the character sticks something in their pocket, meets a stranger or something little like that. 😛

@writefury
This is an awesome idea! 🙂 🙂 🙂

@bluejay, The suspense is killing me! What happens to the man? XD

@writefury, what a great idea!

@Daeus, Oh my word, that’s an awesome name! 🙂

@daeus YESSSS XD
But we do need an entrance ceremony or something, @faithdk. I’ll get on that. 😉

@kate-flournoy
Okay, wow! This is so good! Amen, sister… 🙂

I’m a little late @anna-brie but I think I’ll try it too 😀 (to the end of the next hour 😉 )