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Snapper replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@alia, that sounds like a fascinating story line! I love the mix of history and future.
I also liked @dragon-snapper‘s title idea. It may not fit exactly but something along those lines would flow well with the second title.
Also keep the flow in mind when you get to naming the third book 😉
Oh yeah! My name’s Anne. Anne Swiftblade. Nice to…[Read more]
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Some Character Illustrations by Lightningmouse in the forum Art 10 years ago
Did one of you mention Redwall?? I love Redwall! @lightningmouse can I just say that your art is awesome and I would love to hear more about this fan-fic.
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Anne Swiftblade replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Since Episode 7 has come out I have seen it maybe four times. In that time I have looked at the story line of both this movie and its predecessors. I must say I agree with all of you on the new characters. However *clears throat* I dissagree with one thing. It’s not really important but I feel it would have made Kilo THAT much better.
I think…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Ooh, texting! Why didn’t I think of that? @bluejay Well, I guess that dragons can’t text with talons and all. Just let my know whenever you start writing. I won’t reply, because I’ll be writing, but please know that I’m there. Thanks!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
…*stomps into room. Finds that the phone is still melted. Gets insurance who replaces the phone and tells Dragon Snapper to not melt anything else. Dragon Snapper agrees, though is crossing fingers behind back* 🙂
*picks up new phone* Hi, @daeus‘ secretary. Yes, I was wondering if Lord Daeus was writing tonight, 8-9? Ah, he’ll get back to me in…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
…*stomps into room. Finds that the phone is still melted. Calls up insurance who replaces the phone and tells Dragon Snapper to not melt anything else. Dragon Snapper agrees, though is crossing fingers behind back* 🙂
*picks up new phone* Hi, @daeus‘ secretary. Yes, I was wondering if Lord Daeus was writing tonight, 8-9? Ah, he’ll get back to…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
…*stomps into room. Finds that the phone is still melted. Calls up insurance who replaces the phone and tells Dragon Snapper to not melt anything else. Dragon Snapper agrees, though is crossing fingers behind back* 🙂
*picks up new phone* Hi, @daeus‘ secretary. Yes, I was wondering if Lord Daeus was writing tonight? Ah, he’ll get back to me in…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@alia
Maybe because the second book is called ‘The Choice’ (I’m guessing that in the book somebody has to choose something?) that the first book should be called ‘The Hunt’ (because they are hunting for the other organization.
Hope this helps!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. 😉 ) -
Ingrid replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. :)) -
Ingrid replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you asking for advise on the names of the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that… -
Ingrid replied to the topic Need a Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you looking for a name for the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that… -
Greta posted an update 10 years ago
@faithdk Hi, Faith! Good to see you back on here again. 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@bluejay Great poem, again! I really do love it. The varying length of the lines creates a beautiful sort of rhythm while you’re reading. I usually prefer rhyming poetry, but you pulled this off really well. Keep up the great work! 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@bluejay
I think this is a beautiful poem. It’s like, a dictionary/thesaurus for the Fruits of the Spirit! 🙂 -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
*Melts more chairs just to be rebellious**smiles, satisfied*
@kate-flournoy @bluejay @lightningmouse(if you just so happen to still be here)
I wrote 739 words, which I pretty good for a scene which was hard to write. I fixed a few things as well that needed fixing, so I’m happy with that.
Good job to all of you! Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have…[Read more] - Load More
