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@catwing @winter-rose Nuts. You found out. I have the ring because it is my source of power. Not only shall the chairs fear me, but so shall all of Middle Earth! Haha!

@winter-rose Well…if you don’t pledge your allegiance to any stewards, it shouldn’t be so bad. 😉
How is college?

@catwing Bestiest dragon? 😉 Awesome. Has a nice ring to it. 😀

@winter-rose Things going well in the Shire. Nice and peaceful with roast chicken. 🙂
@catwing Correctomundo.
Everyone loves Toothless. 😛

@that_writer_Girl_99 As a writer, it is my job to inform you that the possibilities are endless.

@winter-rose Frodo, greetings!
@daughteroftheking
*chases cowardly chairs*

@that_writer_girl_99 *glances at the floor*
*grins*
Heh heh heh.. 🙂
@catwing If the shaking is distracting you, let me know. I’ll melt it. 😛 XD

@daughteroftheking Then my reputation proceeds me. Fear me, all ye KaPeefer chairs!

@catwing @that_writer_Girl_99 @daughteroftheking @winter-rose Let’s see if I can do this without melting any chairs. I’m on.

@aislinn-mollisong I only had time to look through the prologue and chapter one, but here’s a couple things I noted:

The prose feels very choppy and is very bare-bones. Try fleshing out your descriptions more and varying the sentence structure for the writing to feel more smooth.

You do a lot of telling as opposed to showing, which is probably…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Good to know! My to-read list is ridiculously long, but I’ll see if I can fit that somewhere on it. xD

@daeus I’m a fan. YES.

@catwing @anyone else I’m signing out now. I wrote about 500 and beta-read a bit.

@catwing *pops in* What? Where? I don’t see her! Aha!
*pulls Dragon Snapper out of the internets*
Stop melting chairs!

@catwing *wobbles and steadies self on imaginary wall* You know. The sequel on page 31 of this topic.

@emily Greetings!

@shannon I do eat food like that from time to time–but I still don’t like onion rings or popcorn shrimp. 😛
Dragon Snappers like to eat lots of italian food and anything with noodles. They also eat chicken, and noodles. Lots of noodles. 😛

@shannon Well…I don’t really eat anything deep fried, so if you say so. 😛
Welcome!

@kate-flournoy Sometimes, I can be smart. 😛

@kate-flournoy Oh dear. Yep. I don’t have any of those on stock.
*shudder* Not those.