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@daeus
Hm… the setting itself sounds pretty original. I like that,
buuuut, it sounds just a BIT cheesy or something like that. I mean, who HASN’T heard of the guy who’s (cowardly, some type of life-problem, “weak”, etc.) who rises up to save his friends from some evil guy with “undefeatable” weapons.

The story isn’t bad, but I just wouldn’t…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
@daeus Well…do you want my big thoughts or little thoughts?

@mariposa
Yeah, the title is actually Substitute which is the meaning of Jaclyn’s name. 🙂

@aratrea XD Perfect.

@the-real-kapeefer Actually, according to your profile picture you don’t even /have/ arms, so no, you don’t have any 2nd Amendment rights here.

@koryn-koch Yeah my siblings are still in it. I won’t judge this year but maybe later…

@shannon Ok, got it

Dragons are overused in my opinion…
I prefer zombies, Xenomorphs, or humans. Yes, humans. Those are the biggest monsters possible for a good story! Sorry, I’m like that…

Well, technically, my parents say it’s all in my subconscious. (my parents raised me speaking Chinese until I had to start school), so really, they said I need to go so I can “remember”. I can understand Chinese, but I’ve forgotten how to speak it evidently…

@koryn-koch there are only 10 regions, so if your region did average they would get at least 2 spots in the top 2 in each category, so… ;P
@aratrea Wow, way to pull the curtain away, also why fo you guys have forum guidelines? Are you guys trying to take my first amendment away from me, what’s next, the second 😉

@salome01w4g Yeah I’m joking, I…[Read more]

Hey guys, I need a bit of prayer. Basically, despite being Asian, my parents enrolled me into a Chinese teaching class. I did pretty well last year and I was allowed to skip a grade. My first class is tomorrow, so please pray that things will go well and everybody won’t be TOO advanced for me. I’m a fast learner so please pray that I won’t be too…[Read more]

@raevynstar Welcome to the site! Glad you found us. 🙂 What’s the premise of your current work-in-progress?

Yeah, I’m not planning on going overboard. Just adding bits in to make it feel like a well-told story instead of a history book.

@salome01w4g

Here’s another one I made. This is the protagonist of my WIP, Jaclyn Fallows.

@raevynstar
Hey there! *tries to think of a good get-to-know-you question* Hmmm…are you a dog or a cat person? 😉

Yup, I was always thinking about making the big Inquisitor have his own side of the story. Chasing down this HERETIC for his good church…

@daeus, okay, yeah. I’m not that far into its development yet so I hadn’t thought of that. Huss had followers that others deemed “Hussites”. Do you think the story of one of them would make a good subplot?

@salome01w4g, yup. I’ll definitely keep that in mind. I’m not adding things like new storylines and stuff that’ll change what really…[Read more]

Hey guys, thanks!

@salome01w4g, it’s BASED on real events, but the fun part is filling in the parts where you don’t know exactly what or HOW something happened.

As for the subplots, @daeus, what do you mean? I was planning on having it go on almost like a chase. With people beginning to question their loyalty, more pressure on Huss to translate…[Read more]