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Daeus replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
First of all, let me just repeat that this is a great poem – not to mention long, which I is something I can never manage.
Also first of all, make sure all your lines have a capital first letter.
Now for the many other first of alls:
but he never once forsook the field; forsook the toil or tears.
Replace “toil” with a one…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic blogs? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
There was a thread on this a while ago. You can check it out below. Mine’s on there though I still haven’t decided whether it is actually a blog or not. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/any-bloggers-out-there/
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and @overcomer… 😛 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@spradlin, @hislittlerose, @jadamae… you guys are all poets. What do you think?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Okay @Daeus, @hope, @anyone-else-who-liked this, I’ve been working over it, and I think I’ve got it finished. I want to publish it with KP, but I want to know what you guys think of it first. Without further ado, here it is in it’s entirety.
And just because, here’s the link to the music I was listening to when I wrote the last verse. I think it…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay will respond tomorrow.
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Daeus replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Notecards in the clouds
limitless thoughts on limitless stuff.
The winged notecard.
Magic box of notecards
Lines on an unruled notecard
My note cards – lots of them…um, maybe I can think of something better.
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Daeus replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@spradlin Are you talking about a title for your blog or a title for a blog post?
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Daeus replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay You can kind of visit it by using the street view feature on google maps.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay I have no I idea how you write so fast. I’m still writing myself but I only have 422 words. Granted, I did have some troublesome things to think through while writing this part that slowed me down, but still, you obviously write fast.
I’m happy though because I kept writing the whole time which is the most important thing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay Goody good, tag along.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Hey, I’ll be writing here in a minute. Anyone want to join?
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Daeus replied to the topic Could use a little input in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks @hope. I’ll go ahead and send it to you then.
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Daeus replied to the topic Could use a little input in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Hey thanks @the-happy-bookaholic. I’ll especially appreciate your grammar skills.
I’ve still got a couple things to work through from Kate and Jada’s edits but I’ll send you a copy as soon as I’m done with those.
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Daeus replied to the topic Staying Interested in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@faithdk It sounds like a simple need for more planning. I’ve managed to write a novella that had a good plot without knowing much about where I was going with it, but in the novel I am working on now I have most things planned ahead and I will tell you it is a lot easier. My writing style also seems to flourish more when I have more structure. I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Haha, that’s so funny! We got so close! 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Haha, that’s so funny!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
828 words, @bluejay. Yourself?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Okay! See ya in forty minutes! 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
April fools day for us is tomorrow. 😉
I’ll write with you, @bluejay. Till 8:00? Uh… that’s forty minutes from now, our time. 😛
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