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@anne-of-lothlorien *gasp* How selfish! Why, the most humble dragon on earth would never do that!
😛

Hmm, I’m kind of like you in that I read a lot of nonfiction. I have loads of suggestions for nonfiction books, but as for fiction, well, *scratches head* I really don’t know… I’m kind of picky when it comes to fiction. I always kind of liked An Old Fashioned Girl and Eight Cousins by Louisa May Alcott.

@that_writer_Girl_99 I’m sighting out now. I wrote a 527 word poem, and did some formatting.

@that_writer_Girl_99 That’s okay. You just need Star Wars glue. 😛 I love Star Wars too. 😛
@winter-rose No! Frodo! No!

Thoughts:

The imagery here is good.

First line: wakes works better than awakes.

“No longer free does flow” doesn’t flow well off the tongue.

“the earth had”: “the earth was” works better, I think.

“To warmer weather flee”: Took me a moment to figure out what that meant.

“through flowers flit”: I love the sound of that 🙂

The rythm wasn’t…[Read more]

@that_writer_Girl_99 Well…my hearts broken. 😛

@that_writer_Girl_99 Well…my hearts broken.

@winter-rose Well, remember when I begged Gandalf not to turn me into a toad? Well, to be able to protect you, he turned me into a dragon. 😀 I guess it’s better than a toad.

@winter-rose *sniffles*
You know what this dragon says to that? *melts the Ring*

@Anne-of-Lothlorien the first is beautiful and the second hilarious. XD

@Anne-of-Lothlorien what @Daeus said. 😛

@AnneofLothlorien what @Daeus said. 😛

@that_writer_Girl_99 *laughs sheepishly* Aha…we like LotR…a lot.

@winter-rose Can’t you even hear yourself, Mr. Frodo? You’re not yourself. It’s that Gollum! It’s this place! It’s that thing around your neck!

@winter-rose I could carry it for a while. Share the load.

@winter-rose Alright, Frodo. Looks like we’ve got a few rabbits that Gollum snatched for us, and…oh, would you look at that. More lembas bread.

@winter-rose Are you still there?

@Anne-of-Lothlorien I don’t see anything to pick at, but there’s not much more than externals here. Here are my questions to get to the heart of the story.

1. What’s the girl’s inner longing? e.g. she wants her parents to be reunited.
2. What’s the girl’s story goal? e.g. get back to her parents. (it’s best if her longing and goal can be closely…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien Are you able to attach it as a separate photo through the image link so it shows up like we do with our art? I can’t click links.

Hmm. Somebody added me to their facebook group. That might be neat to attend. We’ll see.