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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yep, the 3rd person one.
@graciegirl Well, cool. 🙂 I’ll send you the doc.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus Keep writing it, and if it still feels worthless, stop. 😛 As of right now though, it is pretty cool. His POV is intriguing. I think mostly only writers would understand—at least really GET—a story like this though, not regular readers…
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Gracie replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@Dekreel I’ve only seen seasons 2, 3, and half of season 4 of the reboot, so I’ve only ever known Ten. XD I’ll let you know which is my favorite though once I meet some more. 😛 This also means I haven’t seen any of the older seasons. Where do you watch them typically? To be honest, I wasn’t sure if it was even possible to watch the older ones.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@allison-grace @emily @ingridrd @daeus @catwing @epicaddie2 Baring unforeseen circumstances such as dog or something else, I’m writing for the next hourish.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus Soooooo, funny thing. XD We actually had to cancel the camping trip because the weather hereabouts is icky, so if you still need another beta reader, I’m available. If you have enough though, no problem. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Welcome @Dekreel! My family used to live in TX, and it IS WAY TOO HOT.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien Haha!!!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus This is the 3rd Person thingy, right? But regardless, yup. It might be closer to two weeks depending on what comes up though. Me and my notorious slow reading. :/
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
I love Audiomachine music. @emily TREE OF LIFE!!! *dies* So beautiful!
Although I think one song that I really think is inspiring is by Enya, The River Sings. I love that one…very hero-returns-from-journey-ish.
For my upcoming WIP, I find that Stained Glass by Jon Guerra is perfect. It’s basically for his character arc.
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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 Yep. I would also direct you here: https://kingdompen.org/category/articles/worldbuilding/
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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 I’m working through this myself at the moment, but I do have one or two things to say.
First, you want to develop your world well before you start writing. Sure, you should only spend so much time building your story world. You have to start eventually, but spending a whole month world building would not be unreasonable. A good…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 😂 😂 😂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 a girl after my own heart. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 good thoughts. I played around a lot with government and where it fits in, but it was so equally part of all four of the pillars I couldn’t bring myself to make it its own separate one. 😛
It’s probably the most perfect manifestation of a country’s EiL within itself, whereas Economy is a further exploration of that outside of…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 11 months ago
@epicaddie2 Ooooh I was talking about this a while back… let me go copy and paste my emails… XD
It’s a fairly simple thing, but once you delve into it there’s a lot to work with.
Basically, I came up with four pillars I think every culture is built on.1. History
2. Religion
3. Geography
4. EconomyIn that order. History and Religion…
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.
@salome01w4g The google doc would be fine.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus Ergh! I JUST remembered that I leave Friday for a camping trip. 😕 (Man, how in the world did I forget that?!) I’ll be gone for a couple days so I wouldn’t be able to make the deadline.
I’m afraid I must withdraw my offer. 😔
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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