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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:

that.
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Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
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Daeus replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd I want that on my wall!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths Yeah. I knew it was in editing mode. I left it that way because sometimes people like to leave long comments at the end of a story. Suggesting mode is much better for editing in general though. You can switch it to suggesting mode whenever you like.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
There. I made one!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I think I sent you an email, but if you didn’t get it, you can access it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16ycjr6zOnxjAtIpSkMQ6SDkHKlg5iX3oMfA9aHpUD7I/edit?usp=sharing
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel XD The arrival of Fall is indeed a glorious thing. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus Righto.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel same. I know it’s a classic but I’ve never read it. 🙁
But as far as unique and compelling stories go… when you think about it, all stories are pretty much a mash-up of the same storylines being used over and over again. What makes them their own is what the author uses them to say. When a new voice picks up an old story, new depths…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily Enya! (Watch, I’m not going to die this time) *lives* Isn’t it awesome! 😀
Well, I was listening to some videogame music, but it was scratchy, so I turned to my battle playlist.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily … Um… *shrugs* Maybe it comes from the term, “It’s to die for…” ? Which never made sense to me because if you died for it then you can’t have it. Okay, so I didn’t die. I pretended to die. I’m still alive!

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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where you feel like stuff in the story is happening right now. But dairy entries interrupt that for me. They serve as a constant reminder that the action I am reading about has happened already which is a bit distancing. Maybe it’s just me.
Nope. I’m w…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*stares pensively at screen* I meant: “Even in PAST TENSE narratives…”
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Gracie replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus I likey. *double thumbs up*
As far as the diary debate-thingy…If it will just be a short story or a novella, I say keep the diary format. But as a reader, I would feel a little weird reading something in that format for a full-length novel. It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where…[Read more]
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