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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help with Characterization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
As soon as I come up with a new character, I get this mental image in my mind. It is not really a photograph, but it is a very rough painting, blurry, more of an outline. It is hard to explain. There is also a sort of emotion that I feel in each character. I can tell if that feeling is significantly different from the one I sense for another…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Yes, that sounds far more pleasant.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help with Characterization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Talk to them. If your characters aren’t real enough to hold a conversation with, they won’t be real to the readers. So ask them questions— ask them how they feel about their life, how they feel about what you make them go through. Ask them what they would change about your story— ask them what they’re afraid of, and why they are afraid. Ask…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Don’t worry, @rolena-hatfield, our name gets misspelled and mispronounced just like that ALL THE TIME. 😛 It is a little bit of an odd name. 😉
Yes, I’m loving this topic too. I can’t believe I didn’t introduce this discussion earlier!
As for the Bible question, there are many different ways you could do that correctly. Just base the scene off…[Read more]
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Greta started the topic Help with Characterization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Hello, everyone!
To be honest, I’m new to writing. I’m beginning a novel (I’m still in the planning stage), and I really need to develop my characters. Do you all have any characterization tips?
Thanks!
~ Greta
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Well then I forgive you. 😉 😛
And yes @Daeus, Gandalf does have some absolutely fantastic quotes. And I totally know what you mean about Edmond— and that line ‘wait and hope’… oh man, just thinking about it makes me tear up and get shivers. 😛 It was the perfect way to end the story.
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Greta replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus, yes! Gandalf has so many great quotes. My favorite is probably “All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us.” 🙂
@writefury: Great thoughts! Honestly, I forget to pray. A lot. And that’s not how it should be. But a lot of times, that’s the way people are; they need help, and suddenly they remember that…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Absolutely @writefury! And the point is not so much ‘put as much Christian behavior as you can’ as it is ‘write your story inside out with Christianity at the center, and the Christian behavior will follow.’ It will flow naturally and realistically and characteristically into the story if it is the heart of the story.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Excellent thoughts, @Daeus! And yes @gretald, what you said was completely true. @Daeus covered that a little in his reply— Christianity, and Christian themes and messages, shouldn’t just be slipped or fitted in and hoped to be gotten away with. You shouldn’t say ‘Oh boy I have this really cool story! Oh… yeah, I’d better put some element of…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Sorry, I just kind of put all my thoughts out there. 😛
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Greta replied to the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
The existence of God is a given. Now this one sounds like an absolute no-brainer, but when you think about it it really isn’t. I mean, how easy would it be to assume the person reading your book is a staunch atheist and just dump all the evidence for God’s existence off on them? Very easy.
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Christianity in Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Okay, so I really like to analyze books when I read them— and not just books either. Any kind of story. And lately I’ve been trying to figure out how so many of the old classical authors managed to not only fit Christianity into their stories, but actually portray it well and without shoving it down the reader’s throat.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rapunzel's Hair in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 8 months ago
That is totally adorable. Sure, go for it! And name it Rapunzel. That would be so cute. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Revised Logo Here…what do you think? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
#4
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BlueJay replied to the topic Revised Logo Here…what do you think? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
I like number three. And “yay” you remembered the E. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rapunzel's Hair in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 9 months ago
Hm… has your Rapunzel character been shut up in this tower all her life? She might not even know what scissors are. She might think her hair is an absolutely essential part of her— maybe she thinks cutting it off would kill her. (Thank goodness that’s not true 😛 )
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rapunzel's Hair in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 9 months ago
Hm… has your Rapunzel character been shut up in this tower all her life? She might not even know what scissors are. She might think her hair is an absolutely essential part of her— maybe she thinks cutting it off would kill her. (Thank goodness that’s not true 😛 )
And I don’t imagine she has much else to do in that tower, so taking care of…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Escape scene critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 9 months ago
Oooh… oh yes @Daeus, that could totally work with Denholm! Oh boy… I may have to try that. 😛 He’s a really… intellectually geeky sort of guy, for the lack of a better word. He likes using really deep, obscure concepts to bewilder other people just for fun.
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Greta replied to the topic My first fantasy novel in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 9 months ago
Congratulations, Hannah! 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Another Cobalt Scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 9 months ago
You know what @writefury, I would absolutely love that, but I can’t say I’ll have the time. :/
Let me know when you’ve finished it, and I’ll see if I can fit it in with my schedule.
Winter is usually an incredibly busy time for us as a family, what with plowing the steep driveway and ferrying our cabin guests up and down in our 4wheel drive.…[Read more] - Load More
