@levipierpont
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The "diversity" trend in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
That was a good read, and though for the most part I agree with his reasoning I don’t think it’s maybe such a big deal as he seems to think it.
In my work male characters are decidedly in the majority, but that’s not because I’m ignoring or belittling the importance of women. It’s because I write a lot of battles and quests and adventures and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The "diversity" trend in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
That was a good read, and though for the most part I agree with his reasoning I don’t think it’s maybe such a big deal as he seems to think it.
In my work male characters are decidedly in the majority, but that’s not because I’m ignoring or belittling the importance of women. It’s because I write a lot of battles and quests and adventures and…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic WordPress in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@hope I tried to leave a comment (or reply) to the captions challenge but nothing happened. Does my info (email and name) get sent to you and do I receive a password so that I can log in? Is that how it works? I don’t know if this counts but would you mind if I posted my two captions here since I can’t get it to work and it ends tomorrow???
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Yeah. The more I thought about it the more I realized that you were probably right. I’ll still be leaving it in though. If I base it on my parents, they probably wouldn’t actually talk about it at the dinner table and if my mum did ask, Dad would probably say ‘talk to you later’ But I want Anna to be part of the conversation, so that was my way of…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Princess Tess and the Perfect Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hmmm, yes that makes sense. I could definitely do that. Thx 😛
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BlueJay started the topic Remembrance Poem-what do you think? in the forum Poetry 10 years, 8 months ago
This is a poem I wrote in remembrance of the men who fought in World War II. I have had quite a lot of feedback on it, but I’d like to see what you guys all think. Here you go-
Bombs exploded, bullets stung
Orders were to fight then run
For the men who went to war.Little food and dirty water
Life was sometimes just man slaughter
For the men who…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Her hair reminded me a lot of turtle soup. Now it could be because I was eating that soup, that made me think of it, but I really don’t know. I have to say I’ve thought of some weird things in the time that I’ve sat here watching people. The plaza is a great place to just sit and watch. Nobody takes any notice of me. I’m dull and quite. The only…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Her hair reminded me a lot of turtle soup. Now it could be because I was eating that soup, that made me think of it, but I really don’t know. I have to say I’ve thought of some weird things in the time that I’ve sat here watching people. The plaza is a great place to just sit and watch. Nobody takes any notice of me. I’m dull and quite. The only…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Barbecued Baron. Delish. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
You guys ALL have my sincerest sympathy! 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I can totally see Buckland in that, @writefury! 😛 Ugh… there are no words to describe my loathing of that character.
‘I glanced up from the clipboard in my hand and squinted my eyes against the bright lights of the set, fixing them on the two men who stood waiting for me to speak. “Okay, guys,” I said. “You both got your lines down?”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Oops, I forgot to post a prompt. 😛 Write a scene between three characters: Everybody, Somebody, and Nobody.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Sure @levipierpont! 🙂
‘He had stood there for uncounted years. Just waiting— just watching. Just hoping they would come. He had never seen their faces, but he would know them regardless. It was who he was— why he was set here. To guard this door, though the blindness of his white marble eyes and the immobility of his carven form would deter…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Has anyone here ever forgotten one of their own plot-twists? I don’t mean like it slipped your mind— I mean like you started it, then forgot about it?
Recently I was writing a very intense action scene, and when my sister read it she kinda looked at me funny, and pointed out that one of the characters involved had broken his arm a few chapters…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Hey… yeah, you’re right. That’s it— the author shouldn’t narrate. The author should simply make unconnected statements that embellish an already presented concept or event. Perfect. I love rules like that… they’re so simple. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love (mercy) vs. Justice in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I think @hope said everything I could have @anna-brie… I will just point out that the Father is justice, and the Son is mercy— and there had to be justice before there could be mercy. Love fulfills justice and makes mercy possible. And you have to accept the love before you can claim the mercy. If you don’t accept it, you only get what you…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
You are absolutely one hundred percent correct, @Daeus. Good thinking. 🙂
I had a new thought on this last night— sometimes it can still actually be good to step OUT of the moment to establish something dramatic. Now let me explain… let’s say we spend a lot of time building up in preparation for a dramatic climax for the scene. We could take…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic From textbook to cinema in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy: Wow, that’s so cool your last name is a Huguenot one! I recently learned about the Huguenots in my French class. They were tough bunch of people. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
And here is another story that I have written @anna-brie Now I really loooooove this one. I actually have things to fix up, but I had already posted it. Enjoy!
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