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Here’s an *awful* one I wrote for a novella I’ve started…

Finnegan “the Mistake” Lane has learned to expect the insults and bullying from his own sister—and in some cases, his parents.  What he doesn’t expect is to get kicked out of the house and sent to live with a crazy aunt he doesn’t know whose home people are afraid to set foot in.

Wren…[Read more]

@dekreel  My w-weaknesses as a writer?  *pulls out 100-foot-long list*  Let’s see here.

I care too much about what other people think.  I have a tendency to view myself as not good enough in relation to writing.

@dragon-snapper  No weaknesses?? Everybody has a weakness! (no offence)

What kind of suggestions? Like weaknesses you could have? *pulls out list* Let’s see, I have perfection, presque vu (tip-of-the-tongue), fear, “imprisonment,” procrastination, discipline, discouragement, and lack of motivation.

@dragon-snapper Star Trek gif!!! 😀 😀 Hehe

Okay, I’m just going to do one villain, but I will try to have everyone have weaknesses.

@inkling-for-christ  I can so relate!! I spent two weeks making notes for an essay I was going to write, and I didn’t start writing the actual paper until the evening before the due date! XD

So! Writing weaknesses! ‘Fess up! 😉

@dragon-snapper  @lady-iliara…[Read more]

@mariposa  Aw, man! Teach me how to draw!! Oh, and the logo is just awesome 😀

@winter-rose  Praying that you keep the faith and that you write a lot! 😉

@winter-rose  @kate-flournoy  @daeus  @emily  @dragon-snapper

Thank you all for your feedback on the prologue!!

Still writing the plot… Mom gave me a suggestion that there should actually be as many villains as there are writers, each designated for one writer. And they all represent writer’s block. Each writer could have like a writer’s blo…[Read more]

@supermonkey42  It’s not too long. It looks interesting!

@winter-rose  Praying that God will continue to guide you…!  🙂

@mariposa  That’s fantastic!  *stares in awe*

@inkling-for-christ  First off, great job!  And congratulations on being brave enough to want feedback.  Now for my suggestions…*rubs hands together*

Okay, this may come as a shock to you, but my first thought was “delete the entire first chapter”.  It seems sort of unnecessary and a lot of it just dumps info instead of showing.  (Sorry, tryi…[Read more]

@salome01w4g  YESSS!!!!  Praise the Lord!

@salome01w4g *gasp!* Praise the Lord!!! Oh, Hannah! *big bear hug* I’m so happy!!! Oh I can’t stop thanking God for this!!!

Here, I’ll do it 😉

@emily  @shannon  @ingridrd  @supermonkey42  @daughteroftheking  @kate-flournoy  @catwing  @dragon-snapper  @winter-rose

*can’t stop jumping around* Oh, praise the Lord!!

@dragon-snapper  Not too shabby, my friend.  😉  In other words, it’s really good.  I loooove the collage.  Nice work.  *high five*

@perfectfifths   The Fellowship of the Ring…I think Pippin says it.  😉

@salome01w4g  That’s rough…praying for you, friend!

@princessfoo *round eyes* Intriguing! Sounds like something I’d want to read! 🙂