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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
“Sure,” I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
“Oh,” I said. I hadn’t meant to hurt him. “Well, we can be good friends now, right?”
He nods and looks at me.
“Um, anything else I should know?” My head was hurting and I rub my temples.
“Oh boy,” said Gavin. “You really have forgotten everything. Perhaps I had better come in and explain it to you so you understand what is going on.”
“Sure,” I…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out of your lot of titles. “Marks of a Typewriter.” But “Dust and Ink” is good too. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
@overcomer I like this one definitely out your lot of titles. Marks of a Typewriter. But Dust and Ink is good too. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Question About Submissions and Sharing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
:O Sarah!!! So this is the kind of friend that I’m emailing with?!? *Faints* 😛
@overcomer I do love the beach. You make me wish for summer all again. We are into our first month of autumn and heading for winter. 🙁 (And my birthday 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy A wise move. I shall endeavour to do the same. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
Written Words.
Ha, I thought of another one. Yay! (Don’t know if it’s any good though.) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Help! I have a nameless poem! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 1 month ago
@overcomer Ooooo….great poem. I really loved it.
Hmm…titles. Not my strong point.
The typewriter.
Words.
“Come on Tess. Think, think.” *scrunches up eyes and holds breath* Gasp, gasp, gasp. “Nope, that’s all I can think of for now.” 🙁 Sorry -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight off me.
The faces stared back at me blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell me the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight off me.
The faces stared back at my blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the whole…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
“Well…um…maybe someone else would like to say something?” I asked, trying hard to move the spotlight of me.
The faces stared back at my blankly.
“Fine,” I said. “Tell the problem, and I’ll see what I can do.”
“You should know what the problem is,” one little old lady screeched at me.
“She can’t remember,” another argued.
Suddenly the whole…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@warrioroftherealm Welcome to the topic. Idaho! That’s great. 😀
@daeus I envy you. I’ve always wanted to look like a movie star!!!!!!! -
BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I awoke to the sound of tapping for the fifth night in a row. At first I thought it was outside… but then I realized it was coming from the mirror again. Now, I’m tough, but hey, when your mirror taps, that is creepy, especially in the dead of night. And the fact that I had just read Snow White. I reached out a shaking hand and flicked on my b…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I awoke to the sound of tapping for the fifth night in a row. At first I thought it was outside… but then I realized it was coming from the mirror again. Now, I’m tough, but hey, when your mirror taps, that is creepy, especially in the dead of night. And the fact that I had just read Snow White. I reached a shaking hand out and flicked on my b…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Yet another long corridor. This is crazy. What does this house look like from the outside? I have absolutely no idea what to do. Maybe I’d try a different door. Trying the next door in line I found it to be like the room in which I had awoken. The sheets were messed up, so I figured people must be somewhere close by. And then I found them. Behind…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Characterization help…again in the forum Characters 10 years, 1 month ago
I definitely agree. @daeus 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic "Pen Names" A Good or Bad Move? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, I believe you! @kate-flournoy
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BlueJay replied to the topic Characterization help…again in the forum Characters 10 years, 1 month ago
Tessa Just: ESFP
Not quite @daeus. I’m actually an ENFJ. What made you think of me as an ESFP? How did you guess/figure it out? What did you use?
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BlueJay replied to the topic "Pen Names" A Good or Bad Move? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy If you’re interested, Mark Twain was first a printer but became a river pilot instead. This experience stimulated him to write Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn. The name Mark Twain, which he first used as a newspaperman, came from his riverboat days. Mark twain means two fathoms, a measure of depth of water. (Twain meaning two and…[Read more]
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Haley Long and
Laurel Adams are now friends 10 years, 1 month ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic KP 404 in the forum Questions and Support 10 years, 1 month ago
Whoopy! All better! 😀
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