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Esther's profile was updated 3 years, 3 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Llama in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
We sneaked up to the garage…
Ok, as soon as I saw this I was like “Yesss!” Because I see people used “snuck” all the time, even in published books and it makes me cringe every time I see it. 😆 So good job. 👏🏼😂
Anyway, I like it so far and am looking forward to reading more! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
😂
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Esther replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Oh yes, hehehe
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @whoever-else
Alright, I finished a couple chapters! I may have Freya’s done by tonight, too, but I’m not really sure yet.
Here’s Zeniya’s:
The sun beat down mercilessly on the Wileny Plains, pulling water out of the ground and the air and drawing sweat to the surface of Zeniya’s fur. She panted, tongue lolling out of her m…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Progress Chat!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
XDXD
Yes! I definitely need some kind of accountability for writing, so we’ll have to figure something out.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision
Thanks everyone!! I just came back from the library, lol, so next time I go I’ll have to see if they have any of these! 😄
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Progress Chat!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I would love to join this! I’m kinda going through and figuring out my goals right now, so it should fit. I have, let’s just say… a lot to get done. XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hotel/Wedding RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@euodia.vision
I just know that Anika, Falon, Freya, Zeniya, and Jax (because he had to stay with Niya) are in a room. Besides that, I forget where everyone is at.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I don’t want to make a whole other forum for this, so I’ll ask it here. XD
Does anyone have any dystopian book recommendations?
I noticed that since I write dystopian, I should probably read in that genre. I already know about the Hunger Games but I don’t think my mom wants me reading those, so I’m looking for other suggestions. 🙂
I don’t k…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Oooh it’s looking good so far!! 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Ok…
It looks like the pics aren’t working again… 🤔
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Esther replied to the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
BLURB:
They’ve been trapped inside The Orb for twenty years. It covered all of Aletheia. But it slowly closes in on the nation. The people stuck inside have no way to communicate to those outside. Families are separated. But the people have gotten used to The Orb. Until it is down to one district… only a few cities… Amidala Nadir is content with…
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Esther started the topic Endoxos Trilogy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Hey everyone!!
So, since a few of y’all have been making forums solely for talking about your WIPs, I’ve decided to do so as well!
I don’t know where to start, but I’ll post the moodboard and the blurb for the trilogy, then y’all can ask any questions you may have about it! (Whether you wanna hear about the charries, the plot, the world, a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
Yw!!
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Esther replied to the topic Project Chrysanthemum in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I love that!!! That is so cool!! 🤩 I love the concept of different races/tribes!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Rose in Wonderland: A Novel Idea I’ve Been Developing in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
*me just now seeing this*
Oooh it looks so cool!! The characters are really well thought out! I’d definitely read this. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Zutora in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 3 months ago
XDXD
Like I said, it’s sort of a rough draft, but yeah my bro mentioned being interested in writing, so we just immediately began planning a book… Which turned into a trilogy XD. We’re working on a bunch of intros right now, because there are… *counts on fingers*… eight fairly even POVs in the first book, seven in the second…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character occupations in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
Awesome! Yw!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I don’t do this with all of my moodboards, but with some of them, I’ll pick a certain color I want for the character’s aesthetic. So you could pick a color, then look up, (for example), “pink aesthetic” “pastel blue aesthetic” “yellow aesthetic” That may give you some pictures to fill in the blanks. 🙂
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