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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@jess-penrose you said you were going to send me some things in passive voice?
@alia Yay for your friend!
@daughteroftheking AND OUR KEYBOARDS ARE DUSTY AND COVERED IN SPILLED DRINKS BECAUSE WE CAN BARELY SEE AND HAVE TO LEAN TOWARD THE SCREEN TO SEE WHAT WE ARE WRITING!!! AND WE HAVE GONE CRAZY OVER MISSSPELLED WORDS AND HOW THEY CHANGED THE…[Read more] -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@rochellaine We’re Britain?!
Kay Waters: At least we have tea.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@kaya-young @rochellaine @ariel-ashira @alia @skredder @seekjustice @daughteroftheking
*bursts in on sugar rush* I HAVE NOT ABANDONED THIS KINGDOM! I HAVE READ MOST OF THE POSTS WHILE I WAS AWAY! I’M NOT ON SE YET!
*Stops to take a breathe* Hi IMMA KAPEEFER, Til I’m old and gray! We should combine them!
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NC Stokes posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Heyo. Random fact of the day: my computer sometimes deletes random sites from my search history. (including KP, even though I’m on here like everyday) So, it deleted your goggle doc from my history and now I can’t find it. Could you give me the link again? I’m going to try to finish reading before summer break.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd Ok, this is the part where I’m honest and admit I’m behind the times. Until today, I didn’t notice that you had posted the chapters after 1 and 2. Soooo, I have some reading to catch up on. I’ll get that done by Wednesday.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@kaya-young *knits aggressively in the corner* I WILL finish this shawl before my laptop dies… 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@kaya-young Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! 🙂
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 TIL WE’RE OLD AND GRAY AND MISSING TEETH AND OUR DRIVER’S LICENCES GET REVOKED BECAUSE WE CAN’T SEE OVER THE DASHBOARD ANYMORE!!!! BUT WE’LL STILL BE WRITING BECAUSE WE’RE KAPEEFERS!!!
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Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thank you! And thanks again ever so much for reading. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 About the title, I’m actually thinking @skredder ‘s idea of Underneath fits it perfectly! 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Okay, I’m gonna kind of sort of *completely* copy you and ask you some questions about my story, if you don’t mind (since you’re the only one who has finished it so far)!
1. Who was your favorite character and why?
2. Were there any scenes that felt unnecessary or just like a complete info-dump?
3. Are the characters (especially…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters 7 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 OH! I actually went to England and France while we were in Europe, and of the two, I liked England better. I live in Ohio so we flew to D.C. and then took a 7 hour flight to London.
We stayed in a London flat for a few days to sight-see and also to visit my “sister” (who isn’t biological but is an orphan who we hosted a while ba…[Read more]
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Thank you letters. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I didn’t think about possibly making cards, but it’s a good idea. No I didn’t post it on SE.
Thanks for the advise!
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Sink replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
- My favorite character:
Hm… I like your MC, Rin, but I always go for the anti-hero type, so I’m going to have to say Jax. He’s well written, and has got hints for a few ghosts in his past. Not that Rin doesn’t, but I think I like Jax more because he’s a bit more levelheaded. Rin has spunk, but she jumps to conclusions(not that…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
1. My favorite character is Jax. *hugs him* He is very headstrong and brave, while still a kind gentleman.
2. My favorite scene would have to be the one near the end when Uma and Rin say they’ll be friends forever…it’s so sweet and you really triggered a lot of emotion. 🙂
3. Hmmm…no specific scenes. Some sentences here an…[Read more]
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Thank you letters. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@kaya-young Thank you!
@jenwriter17 I will try.
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Thank you letters. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 Malaysia
That did help thank you!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 7 years, 11 months ago
Aaand I forgot to post a question. Silly brain. 😉 Would your character rather not remember who they are or have awful memories they wish they could forget?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 7 years, 11 months ago
@rochellaine Katie would rather be invisible, and she would probably only be visible to her mom. Brant doesn’t like anyone. 😛 Just kidding, but he would probably still rather be famous. Ogden would rather be invisible, and only visible to his niece, who went missing and he’s been trying to find, because then if someone saw him he would know it…[Read more]
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That’s strange… Really strange.
Here you go. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fQ0k1esgfsGjaQYco4i5zt4Bhh27BEcdP0q8US_1ueg/edit
I’m editing now and trying to finish so I can publish in the fall. :3
It is quite weird. Thanks! Yay, I’m so excited you’re going to publish!