Lady Iliara

@daeus what if you put the guy’s head in the bottom left corner of the blue box, and maybe a magnifying glass or something in the other corner? Would that work?

Ooh, awesome! I’m using an iPad so the “links” thing is ESPECIALLY handy. Let me try a picture here…testing:

@perfectfifths Oh, you’re probably right 👍🏻👍🏻

@aislinn-mollisong I liked it! The second one was really good. I love how your character has a lot of personality. (I struggle with that for my characters. 😉) Keep up the good work! (Wishing you much luck with NaNoWriMo!)

@ck4always There’s online acting courses where you could learn stuff, you just wouldn’t (obviously) be able to perform in something. Although there may be a way to take acting courses and then meet up with other kids to do a performance. I don’t know, as I’ve never checked it out. 😀

@catwing @perfectfifths @dekreel The Spirit show on Netflix is actually some sort of spin-off where they added a girl into the story. O_o I haven’t watched it, but I kinda shudder…Spirit actually takes place in the Wild West, so I don’t know why they added a modern girl.
*shrugs* my opinion. 😊 Just, that’s not the original.

@aislinn-mollisong THAT is an excellent explanation. *chortles in delight*
And @catwing, that is funny! 😆

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Yes, well some of that is to make short sentences for effect, but I’ll think about that! 😀 Thanks! And @salome01w4g 😊
I’ll give thought to the council. My thought is that they’re just a small band of thieves, but somebody else hired them for some purpose….*goes off to writing corner to ponder this more thoroughly*

Thanks everyone! ☺️☺️

@aislinn-mollisong *guards pile of rocks jealously* NO! ARIELLA GAVE THEM TO ME AND I WILL KEEP THEM IN HER HONOR!
Ok, ok, I’ll tell you. It makes her the Pendragon. 😁

(If no one gets it, I can explain… *slinks away to hide with rocks*

@sarah-anson *gasps* *falls over delightedly* You have horses! You lucky girl!
*lies on grass, staring into the blue sky, daydreaming about owning a horse of her own someday*

@catwing WATCH. IT. NOW. It’s such a beautiful story. And the songs, yes the songs are just…yeah. Awesome.

Oy, I know what you mean about sarcasm. Sometimes I call my stories “humorfests.” Actually, the poems suffer more from that malady. And I can’t seem to stop RHYMING! My specialty is couplets. 😄
As far as planning goes…yeah, it varies. One story, I had the plot all worked out years ago, but now it seems kinda silly. (I still haven’t written…[Read more]

@sarah-anson Thanks muchly!
About the Council, yes you’re probably right. My real problem is that I don’t know why they want Alex. I wasn’t even sure they were going to be my main antagonists, since I have no plot for this story! 😆 But I should think about that.
Yes, Alex suffers from what I call “Weak Alex Syndrome.” I think I made him react too…[Read more]

@ck4always Well, i just started last year, and I’m not sure how similar my acting class is to the typical sort. My class isn’t elite, exactly. 😛 But here’s what I know.
I’ve got about 12 people in my group. I’m actually the oldest, but I’ve not had as much experience. What I will say is that teachers are always more excited to see enthusiasm…[Read more]

@daeus @kate-flournoy @catwing @daughteroftheking @aislinn-mollisong @xonos-darkgrate @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @salome01w4g @anyone who wants to
Would you mind critiquing a chapter of my “Alex and Ian” story for me? I generally feel like my stories are missing something—sometimes I call it emotion, or description, or maybe not enough chara…[Read more]