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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:
Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?
I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
I love this! Its very intriguing, I can’t wait to read more! And I just love the names you chose for everyone, im a name nerd XD.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
So, since I’m having serious trouble deciding who to add, I’ll let you choose for me. Would you rather have a manipulative and fierce but slightly paranoid dragon officer who has a bone to pick with my MCs? Or would you rather…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks! Yours seems cool too! I love the whole fire spirit idea
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Actually, I’ll just make Maddie completely powerless since she isn’t in her own world. Also, I completely messed up and called the other character Ben. His name is Sam. I don’t know why I did that.
Sam
Sam stared at his h…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I really want to add Madeline, but she’s a literal cartoon. Unless I made a human version of her… *shudders at the thought*
Ok, yeah, I’m doing this.
Madeline: looks like she’s about 7 years old, about 3 and a half feet tall, wearing a plain white knee-le…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oh, yes!!! The accent!!!🤣🤣
Yes, IKR?! 🤣🤣
I love that little story!! 😂
Reminds of a certain…Neverending Story perhaps??? 🤣🤣
What’s that? I’ve never heard of it, sry. 😅
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-on-here XD
ok y’all…I’m really excited about this and I have some villains/antagonists/antihero’s I wanna put in but like I mentioned before they’re from different timelines.
Character castle isn’t really a “Make Sense” kinda place anyway XD so would y’all mind if f…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ok, so I’m not likely to be on here as much, but I have a couple characters I might add. They’ll be dragons, so should I make them their actual size (six to seven feet on average, and that’s on four talons) or should I make them human-sized?
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Felicity replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Yeah, I haven’t exactly mapped out what the underground actually looks like, so I’ll have to figure that out at some point. I guess I figured that since it was from Amara’s perspective, I would have it to where Kirah knew Keith pretty well, and trusted him, at least for the most part. But yeah, I definitely need to look at that…
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Whoa I really like Eclipse!! That’s so cool that he uses fire XD
Thanks!
Yw!!
Yes, definitely!! 😁😆
😁😁
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
This is getting pretty cool!! Love it! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Alrighty, everybody! I’ll write the first RP!! 😀
Let me introduce you to the one and only Derek Len!
Age: idk. Probably 40-something. But that doesn’t really matter. XD
Appearance: Dark hair slicked to the side; silver-blue eyes; sli…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings OOH I wanna go!!
I glance at my watch; How is it already so late? It might be best to go home. I have no clue where I’m going, and the girl is nowhere to be seen.
I turn to walk out the tree I came out of, to find the opening is gone. My heart beats quickly. It was just her…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin ok…I actually really love that XD because reading that and then it ends up being adorable triplets at the end is so cute!!!
Especially when you take in the context “Stop arguing like toddlers! Let’s settle this like men!” XD XD!!! I think if you ever get the chance you should rewrite this!!
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
I’m glad y’all are interested!!
Ok, so imma try to answer all of your questions.
Villains, antiheroes, and antagonists are all allowed. They can be human, they can be half human, or not human at all, as long as they can communicate som…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Sooo…. What if the villain is not-so-humanish but can talk??? 😅
I’m not @Esther, but I think it would probably be okay! In the regular character castle, @Keilah-h has had dragon characters that can talk, and so has @Loopylin . And @godlyfantasy12 has a talking fox, so it probably is okay, but since Esther created this one she’ll h…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Super original, but maybe they want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER, or something like that. Idk. 🤣
🤣 Haha, yeah, they probably do want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER Maybe they have fights over who is the ‘bestest’ XD
Hmmmmmmmmm…. Or MAYBE they have to work together to stay alive, because the castle is filled with weird monsters or s…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@kyronthearcanin on the character castle u can do however many u like 😊 but I suppose it’s up to @esther-c since she has created this one
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