Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@rae

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

AHAHAHA This is canon now.

it’s just be like this:

Scout, looking at the food on the table: I could’ve sworn I set out more slices of cheesecake.

Huntress: Since it wasn’t me, I’d blame Sniper.

Sniper: W…

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@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey giiirrl. :] I’d love to brainstorm with you. I’m going out for lunch right now but I’ll be back home in a couple hours and we can exchange emails!

@ellette-giselle

K!

It looks good! The blurb size and length seems right, too.

@loopylin

Yeeaah, I’ve been bad with the roleplays too. I’ve been busy, I suppose. Stay-at-home vacation with the family and getting together with friends before they go to college.

@rae

Happy birthday!!! That sounds like a super cool outing. I love exploring shops on vacation or whatever, and doing it on a birthday sounds even more fun.

Oof I have to think about this.

@ellette-giselle

Do you want feedback on here or through gmail? (Either’s fine)

Once you’re done with that one, I have a completely different pair of characters I wanna see in your style too, but if someone else wants their character drawn I’ll let them have a turn first.

and here’s a model of her I put together:

The little snake is just there for fun. You don’t have to draw him (unless you want to)

Here’s one drawing I have of her, you’ve seen it before most likely:

(feel free to draw Sniper with her if you’d like lol. If you decide you want to, I’ll post his stats. Although given how much I talk about him you probably know all you have to in order to draw him, heh)

@grcr ok! Here’s the character I’ve been using in roleplays across the site–from a recently-finished story in the current series I’m working on. She’s one of my most well-developed characters, and I draw her a lot, so I’d love to see someone else’s take on her.

Name: Her real name? Jaylen Mundy. Her callsign? Huntress.

Age:…[Read more]

@loopylin lolllll I got so depressed when I thought of it too

@rae happy birthday, I’m so glad you were able to have fun with your friends and family!!

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!

@rae

I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!

Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

Also…

Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc