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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I really should have replied earlier, I’m sorry.
You’re fine! I was not up last night and I’m replying rather late now; it’s not a big deal for you to do the same.
How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you. Also girl, late night roleplaying is fun but you need to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Also, just so you guys know, I will be out of town for the next four days and won’t be able to reply to whatever you post until afterward.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae oh that stinks, I had a speech and debate class that did like mock trials sometimes and I hated it. (they never rigged it, I just didn’t like how it worked)
my characters are currently heading your direction btw.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin haha they can be sometimes
also thanks, it was my first time and I tried really hard to capture his energy hehe
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper you’re reading this RP too? That’s so cool!
my character’s voices if you want to have a baseline for how they sound:
-Huntress has a very subtle New England kinda accent. IDK if you’ve ever watched my videos, but some of them have my voice in them, and she basically sounds like that but a little less Florida and a little more…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
ok we’re back!
trying something different here hehe, separating all three characters into their own POV.
I don’t think it’ll “chase” them per se, but I do have something interesting in mind.
Huntress
“Where’s Felicity at?” I asked, looking around. “She was right here a minute ago. People don’t just disappear.”
“How d’ya know…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae beautiful!! I know you said that’s not the actual cover but it still looks very good.
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Enid replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months, 2 weeks ago
That looks really good!! It looks like a real cover I might find, maybe in the graphic novel section of the library. The gold lettering contrasts nicely with the cool colors. I’ve mentioned before that the lighting in that piece is great.
This is unrelated to the art, but I just realized I didn’t help much with Baron Chronicles even though…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Also, props to Gabriel for being a responsible guy and making the hatchet a cover. I appreciate his efforts.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy fell into a doze. When she sometimes opened her eyes, a dream haze took over, and the wallpaper flickered, the flowers blooming against each other and cascading down the paper. Fuzzy orange light stained her vision. Her mind retreated into her body and she couldn’t bring herself to stir.
The labyrinth had been such a strange w…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I won’t be able to RP today, but I will DEFINITELY reply to that tomorrow.
Got some good ideas hehe
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Esther replied to the topic WARS in the forum Plotting 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes of course! I’ll compile some ideas and get back to you later this week!
(Mayyyyy or may not have forgotten about this 🫣😂)
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Time can pass while she’s in bed and Gabriel can do whatever he wants
Lucille
The warm mattress and sheets felt familiar and alien at once, after so much walking and uncertainty. Lucy rolled over a few times and held her face into her arms. The soft warmth held her above and pushed her adrift, so everything left her be.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
HA. Thank you.
I suppose she’s literally in limbo until you choose to pull her out or the end of the world arrives.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
That reminds me, deaths never happen in these roleplays but they shouldn’t be so taboo. As long as it works, it’s just an AU.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy rubbed her knuckles into her eyes and then against the wall, unable to push the haze out of her head. This wasn’t the time to be tired. They had to get out, they had to keep walking.
She tried to voice her frustrations, but her words turned into a high-pitched groan. She took a step and stumbled into Gabriel’s arms where he knelt.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Well you certainly scared me. My little sis will freak when I read that part out loud.
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
The girl’s wide eyes dulled from silver to gray, and a final puff of air escaped her stone lips.
WAITWHATNO FELICITY
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.
Lucille
Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.
She slid to…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem.
Be my guest! I just riffed on what I remembered of the characters lol
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