@kyronthearcanin
Active 2 months, 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
You and me both, girl. But it looks like your world-building is paying off :]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to
Well, that’s the freakiest name for robotic machines I’ve ever heard. *Eyes you suspiciously* Have you been worldbuilding for something?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?
(not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.
And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.
and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@grcr you’re welcome 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!
Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@grcr very cool, and I like his name!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Are all the roleplayers allowed to deploy ironwalkers?
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@theducktator
We’re watching the BBC version right now (cough, Challenge 2 homework, cough) and it’s pretty accurate to the book. ☺️ The newer movie isn’t too bad though either, so if that’s what you have access to, I wouldn’t dissuade you. -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
We do need a plan, do we want to get out of the city?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
Marcel cocked his head, amused, and shook his fists to loosen them back to normal. “You could have left us a couple soldiers…”
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
The BBC series XD
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I’m so glad you’ve been drawing and coloring so much! 🤣 It’s been a couple years and we can finally see your own imaginings of your characters.
Ooh he looks like Mr. Darcy. I’m watching Pride & Prejudice right now, lol.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
More soldiers raced in. Marcel clenched his hands, and feathers laced around his fingers. Kicking up water, he swerved around around Ellis, who acted as final flaming barricade.
He deflected a sword with his staff. The soldier barked an unpleasant…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Marcel backed up a little, and the others in his group stepped forward. “Maybe there is nothing for it but to move on, find another city.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.
I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.
Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@grcr Aw, love it!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔
Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!
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