Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@loopylin lolllll I got so depressed when I thought of it too

@rae happy birthday, I’m so glad you were able to have fun with your friends and family!!

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!

@rae

I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!

Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

Also…

Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc

@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!

You are getting so much better at guys and girls!

I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.

I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.

lol that’s cool.

@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!

@ellette-giselle

The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?

I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol

I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.

@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll

Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol

Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷

Thank you so much!!

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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