Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle

I’m trying to fill out these feedback questions before I lose track of what’s happening. *Types furiously*

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

I say remove the part about tragedy striking, and only…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

That’s so exciting!! I know you’ve got some help already, but if you need another set of eyes or another opinion, I’m here! 🤗

@theshadow

This sounds like something my OCD brain would get stuck on as well. I don’t think music is evil just for being a certain type of music, but everyone will always have different opinions about this and if it is OCD, talking about it and trying to come up with a logical answer sounds good, but it’s not going to help.

It’s up to you if yo…[Read more]

also what did you do to the URL to get it to temporarily admin-ify you?

@linus-smallprint It’s cool how you took classes or something for this kinda thing!

That would be cool too, I’d totally give my feedback if you did it.

@ellette-giselle

Exciting! I’ll have to go back and look at the moodboards in a minute, but the link’s not working.

@savannah_grace2009

No worries! I’ll pm you my email real fast :))

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

^Are they siblings/cousins.

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

Honestly, I would love that, but there’s one little problem with Wix. I’ve been on two Wix-created sites, and they start off great, but something about them just……dies really easily and they become ghost towns with like maybe a single post every two weeks or something.

@loopylin @everyone

I don’t think I’m a very visual person either. I can imagine my family’s faces if I try… but not very well. And honestly, I rarely try to imagine what my characters look like as I’m writing. 😂😂 I guess it’s more about the words and emotions to me.

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Are you still planning to put the second book out soon?

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c

Linus, I love the idea of making the forum members-only and trying to make navigation easier. But that would take a lot of time for you (which I’m not sure you have?) and cost money…

I think there are ways to create forums on websites made through Blogger and Wix, which you don’t have to pay f…[Read more]

@grcr

That is so funny! And the art on those is amazing! It looks so professional!

@liberty

Wow, it looks great! But this seems like a sad character or a villain. 😢

@liberty

oooh, is he the villain? or a character who’s on the good side but doesn’t have good intentions?

thoughts:

-he’s either a legitimate heir who shouldn’t be on the throne for some reason but is/wants to be, or a usurper.

-he has a pet crow or raven

-he’s killed before and will kill again

-someone close to him died or he lost…[Read more]

@grcr

Hehe, I love it. XD Well done! And yes, I have wondered that question before. Thank you for your insightful answer, Braxton.

Can I just say – these three boys feel like they have similar denominators from an aesthetic side, and I’m all for it.