Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle

Wow.

I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.

Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.

I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle That makes sense.

I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.

@ellette-giselle

I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]

@keilah-h

If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.

@savannah_grace2009

Is there something you’re struggling with that requires some brainstorming? What was that epic plot idea and why did you like it? I don’t mind helping. I like brainstorm sessions, lol.

@ellette-giselle

It’s okay. Sorry I keep nagging you, but… I feel justified. I’ve had to wait on that ending for about five days.

@ellette-giselle

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

is it really though??

(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)

yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.

I think…[Read more]

bruh is this roleplay thing still on?

or did it die too?

if it is still there and still accepting characters, I had an absolute blast with Snake when he was in the character party roleplay and would love to dust him off.

@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.

I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.

@savannah_grace2009 oh my snake’s teeth

I’m so sorry.

praying for ya, that’s super tough

@savannah_grace2009

yo, what’s up???

glad you’re alive lol, how’s the story going?

@ellette-giselle

Are we getting a new section today?

@savannah_grace2009

Glad to see you around again! We’ve missed you!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so sorry. Praying for you guys 🥰🤗

@ellette-giselle

more like a knitted hat.

ohhh

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

dang that’s dark

also it’s gonna be hard to deal with in the next part of the story. Say that against all odds, the new emperor does become a…[Read more]

also the emperor only reigned for 17 years? That’s interesting. How old was he when he started?

@ellette-giselle Chilling climax, if that’s what this is.

“Ah, look at this!” Leon exclaimed, pulling the tray over. “A cup of lovely, musty water, with who knows what floating in it to give us a lovely surprise, and some rock-hard bread seasoned with just enough mold to make it delightfully poisonous.”

lolllll

“And after that we can count the…

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@the_lost-journal I made those kinds of mistakes too. I do them a lot less these days cause I have been told off a bunch of times, but I look back on something I texted or posted and I’m like “sheesh that was kinda rude now that I think of it.”

@the_lost-journal it’s okay!! stuff like this happens sometimes. It’s kinda hard to tell online what a person’s true intention is. You might’ve said something intending just to point something out, and people might take it as harsh.

No offense, but somebody has already been called unbiblical for believing in old Earth when we haven’t even defined these terms yet. And I don’t think that’s great. I feel like it’s jumping the gun.
Can somebody define ‘young Earth,’ ‘old Earth,’ and ‘biblical’ please? There are different versions of old Earth, and ‘unbiblical’ is being thrown…[Read more]