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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Sooo…. What if the villain is not-so-humanish but can talk??? 😅
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oh, yes!!! The accent!!!🤣🤣
I haven’t done anything on here before, but I just found something that, well, wasn’t that great… Lol. Hope y’all enjoy this.
Guns Under Stars
Tark held cards, spread out in his fingers. He also had a few aces in each sleeve, another tucked behind his ear and under his thick hair, and about twelve more…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I’m a little late, but here…
With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
That’s what I figured. 🙂 It should be a very interesting castle XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
That reminds me. How many characters are we doing? Does it matter? I probably will just do one, but just checking.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Super original, but maybe they want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER, or something like that. Idk. 🤣
Hmmmmmmmmm…. Or MAYBE they have to work together to stay alive, because the castle is filled with weird monsters or something. I don’t know how this works so just throwing things out there.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen
Whenever we start, I’m gonna let one of y’all start us off, because my villain writing… Idk how to describe it other than, “meh.” 😅🤣🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
If it’s like any other character castle I’ve seen, the characters are stuck in a castle, but I suppose they could try to take over the castle… 🤔
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I would totally be willing! I know the general idea of a character castle, but haven’t actually done it before. But I do have some villains kind of waiting to be used, so yes, this is a great idea.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
Right???
I’ve done one on Wingfeather Saga. The others… Hmm. I had a fanfic on Percy Jackson before, basically just to change a bunch of things I didn’t like XD. I’ve done Wings of Fire and Berinfell Prophecies as well, but I don’t remember the rest. 😅 It’s been a while.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
You’re SO welcome! I’ve tried fanfics before, but they haven’t been great. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING!
I love the Wingfeather Saga, and this is just perfect! I can’t think of any critiques to give, or I would totally try to help. When Amatus found Meira like that I was just dying. Which is the exact same thing that happened when Nia started singing it for Podo, so… I think you’ve got the Wingfeather effect…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Thank you!!!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Unfortunately, our area just suffered a tornado, so I will not be able to watch it live, as we are helping with the damage. However, I will definitely watch it as soon as I am able. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
It looks great! Thanks for sharing! I’ll totally listen to it if I get the time. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @whoever-else
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Kirah sat at a long wooden table, in between Cora and Leif. Amara sat across from her, as did Banner, Rollan, and Elryn. She hadn’t yet touched the food in front of her. The visions had stolen her appetite away, and t…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Yes, Sunny is definitely great! I think the reason I liked Tsunami is because I was really shy, and Tsunami was just the opposite XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
That sounds really great! I enjoyed the Jade Mountain Academy thing for the most part, but that’s just cause it had Moon and Qibli in it, who are my absolute favorites. My first favorite was Tsunami, though, especially after book 2.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
That’s really good! (When I wrote that prophecy, I was under the impression that prophecies were supposed to rhyme for some reason… I don’t know where I got that)
Anyway, yeah, Wings of Fire and its prophecies are awesome! I’ve been kind of disappointed by the series recently, though the storyline is really good.
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Oh No! I hope everyone is ok, we’ll keep you and everyone else over there in our prayers!
Thank you so much! Unfortunately, three people died when the airport was destroyed, and our friend’s house was destroyed, but they are okay.
Oh no! I’ll be praying for you! ❤️
Thank you!!!
That’s so sad, It’s awesome that your able to serve them though, you’re in our prayers!