KydonAndWillow

Ah yay, the critique topic! *subscribes*

@whalekeeper

Ah yay, perfect!! Thank you!! I’ll start on her today! *excited* 🤩💛

@hybridlore

(Let us know if anything changes! 😉)

I will 🙂

I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help

@theducktator

Alrighty!! 😃😄

Here’s the basic questions to fill in for anyone who wants a character drawn….

Name: 

Age:

Personality:

Appearance :

Clothes: 

Anything else you want to mention: 

Please be as detailed as possible. Also, feel free to give a face claim if the character has one…

Please be sure to put the colors of the character and their clothes and…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Yay, alrighty!! picking a character is hard lol

@grcr

Ohh, I’d love one! I’ll have to pick a character, though 🤔

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))

It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

@grcr

Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth con…

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@savannah_grace2009

Mmmm…that does make sense, I’m just not sure how to do that.

Instead of “hope”, my characters are trying to fix their problems themselves. Which might be a “false hope”, but I don’t really see it as hope. I understand what you mean, I’m just not exactly sure how to do that.

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you…[Read more]

@anyone

I learned yesterday that we’re going to have a friend stay at our house all day next Saturday so I don’t think I’ll be able to join.

@highscribeofaetherium

I love that idea! I’m interested.