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@esther-c

Yep! So you should make conlangs! That way you can have languages you like!

@keilah-h

Yeah, but ultimately, animation is not what makes a good story. You can tell a really good story from pure visuals, but in most cases, people try using good visuals to make up for bad writing. In the case of Avatar, it’s good animation, and the animation gets better each season, and the writing goes far beyond that.

@freedomwriter76

Am I suppose to RP next?? I know I posted one, but I can’t remember if you’ve replied or not. XD Sry. Lol

@keilah-h

Blueberries………*licks lips* You’re making me hungry. (He has this weird obsession with them.)

Lol XD

That’s hilarious!!

@thearcaneaxiom

XD English is a perfectly consistent language isn’t it! XDXD

For real though!! We have so many borrowed words and weird special sounds and rules. It can be kind of annoying. 🤦🏻‍♀️

If you can’t tell, English is one of my least favorite subjects, lol. It’s kinda ironic me being a writer and all. XD

@80strish

That was so funny!! I love her already!

Oh wait… was I not supposed to give critique on this forum…? 😅

Oops…

XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

@freedomwriter76

I really enjoyed reading that!! One thing I will point out though.

Riker’s sister came forward, Naja still in her arms. She looked up at Riker with a playful smirk. “Have you…

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@keilah-h

I get that, but I can promise that this one isn’t trashy. There is actually some 3D animation implemented in some scenes, though it’s hard to notice because it’s implemented so well.

@freedomwriter76

Cool! I can tell this will probably get emotionally intense, as all stories set in WWII are.

@keilah-h

That sounds like Legends of Korra, the sequal series, and isn’t nearly as good. You need to properly meet Aang and the Gang. Not petty Korra who has no arch, and learns the same lesson over and over again, without actually learning said lesson and applying it for the entire 4 seasons.

@keilah-h

Yeah. Could you describe the episode though?

Yes, there are many fanfictions of Avatar, I don’t really pay much mind to them though, I’m a cannon guy. But there was this one where a 40 year old Azula met Spiderman, and they fell in love, that was interesting, not what I would do with Azula, but it’s there. XD

@freedomwriter76

This looks awesome! Do you speak German? Or do you just study and implement things like that. Is this family Jewish or German?

@keilah-h

That depends on what episode you watched, but either way, you can’t make any judgement of the show based off of one episode, that’s like reading a random sentence of a book and saying it doesn’t have good prose.

@loopylin

Yeah, it should be on those. @lightoverdarkness6 doesn’t have Netflix though, but she probably has access to prime.

@esther-c

Hmm… 🤔

How thought-provoking…

Can “savory” be used as a noun??

And if so… what is it’s plural form?

XD English is a perfectly consistent language isn’t it! XDXD

@acancello

I like what Ami’s answer to the question was, that’s a really good way to describe her!

Ikr? She doesn’t like going out of her comfort zone.

Yet I make her do it all the time in my WIP. Poor girl. XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Nele: Well, so do savors… savories… savori?

Hmm… 🤔

How thought-provoking…

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@mineralizedwritings

@esther-c (HeY hEy!)

jkjk XD

Lol XD

I’ll try to start reading from the beginning today. 🙂

@esther-c

What is your favorite food or meal?

Liren

I think whatever my mothered cooked I loved. That’s a distant memory though. Kirrtes just has me eat whatever is close by.

N’nesha

Neshe: Anything warm and savory

Nele: Anything super sweet

Neshe: Sweets get so old though

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@e-m-trepke

Careful with all the burning, you don’t want to be the new fire lord.

What are you talking about? I just want to destroy the non fans hope by raining a fire over their lands, and from the ashes, a new Avatar centered world would rise, a world where I… I mean… Avatar is the supreme ruler of everything!

@lightoverdarkness6

I once f…

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