KydonAndWillow

@freedomwriter76

lol XD

@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

@savannah_grace2009

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I think it…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

Lol

Zahlin

Nahim was looking at him with murder in his eyes. And now Fennin wanted them to make peace?

“Hard to make peace with a man who just threatened to chop of my head.” Zahlin muttered.

Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.

“Help get one of us killed?” He asked as he followed everyone into the hall, k…[Read more]

Ottoline

She opened her eyes and sat up. Rays of light seeped in through the windows. She turned over in her bed. They were all exhausted.

“Do we have to go downstairs to eat breakfast? I mean have to?” Hedieh was saying from the bunk directly above Ottoline’s. “Because I don’t want to get murdered by a guy with anger issues.”

“I don’t want to…[Read more]

Svlys

Svlys walked down the dark hallway. She could hear someone wailing ahead. She sped up.

She almost tripped over a guy lying facedown on the floor. She yelped in shock, drawing her gun (right, I forgot to mention she has one of those. A very early type).

“Are you ok?” She asked, “What’s going on here?”

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

I can go.

@esther-c

Great job! Yesterday I wrote 1,167.

@rae

lol

@rae

Lol that would be hilarious.

And slightly cruel 🤣

Who’s going to write the next RP?

@jonas

Somehow, I am going to force Ellis and Ottoline to get along. hehe. 😈😈😈

Gotta go! Bye! Talk tomorrow!

The previous page, that is.

@rae

Good 😅

BTW did either of you see my question? At the beginning of the page?

@rae

Oh dear. Now I’m worried XD

@jonas

Lol exactly.