KydonAndWillow

@jonas

I don’t really want it.

@keilah-h

Ok, so yeah, GRCR and Hanako left, so Flaz Lane and Leon are gone. We still have Nahim, Nora, Ellis, Kate, Zahlin, Ottoline, Hugo, Kari, and Snake, ofc (I think that’s everyone?).

We just started the next day. Everyone is in the hall eating breakfast, I think. Fennin will tell ppl what to do afterwards.

Svlys

Svlys attempted – and failed – to keep a straight face. “Compound fracture?” She snickered, “Like, a broken bone?” She slipped her gun back into its holster. This man didn’t seem very threatening, though he seemed to think himself frightening.

“I’m terrified.” She said blandly, “Really, really scary.” She tried not to laugh again and fai…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I started laughing while writing this XD

@savannah_grace2009

He’s just too funny 🤣🤣

@jonas

Well…that was intense.

Good job!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Fracture

He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.

That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.

“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…

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@freedomwriter76 @smiley @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-really-(:

Some of my own memes 🤭 (sry if they’re blurry 😬)

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness, that worst writer one is one of my favorites. 😂

@thearcaneaxiom

lol 😂 for sure

@grcr

Although another theme is to simply avoid making deals with the devil😅

@thearcaneaxiom

Ohh.. I see.

@grcr

The moral is hypocrisy. To do evil on someone means that you yourself have done evil, regardless of what name you have committed it under.

@jonas

So this is essentially a Naln and Szeth character. I like how you added the Unspace sword you talked about earlier, and the price of hypocrisy was a good ending and theme. Great job!

@jonas

Whoa. That was really interesting. Great job!

Mind if I ask if there is a moral of the story at all?

@jonas

Wow 😮

@freedomwriter

lol that one is funny!! XD XD