KydonAndWillow

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @jonas @rae

Do it lol

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h ttps://www.mote.com/m/darsdx5 (delete the space after the h)

Let me know if it doesn’t work.

@savannah_grace2009

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

I’m good with whatever you decide!

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with Jonas, this is a really great start! It’s a much more hopeful beginning too, while there may be uncertainty. I don’t have much to say either, other than the fact that “fit as a fiddle” is an English idiom, and would be very unlikely to be seen elsewhere, but that can very easily be fixed or even ignored. You can…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

But again, I don’t think it’s graphic at all, so you’re good. <3

Okay, that helps me a lot! Thank you! I get really paranoid when I’m writing, XD

And thanks for sharing! The last one was SO SAD!!!! *cries*

That makes sense, thanks so much for helping me!

@jonas

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

@jonas

four appearing at once would be panic inducing, lol.

Inserts “panik” meme

lol

@jonas

Thanks! I was actually really happy with this scene, I think it’s one of my best.

Yes, it would be Sef and Lilitu’s book. I have four chapters of that one so far, but I didn’t want to spam you guys, lol.

Yeah, I was planning to do either Neveah or Ottoline for the “teaser”, though Neveah’s would make more sense.

@highscribeofaetherium

(Hey, Vethe. If you’re in so sure there are only twelve planets then WHAT PLANET ARE YOU ON? lol)

Guess she didn’t think of that one lol XD

Vethe is very unwilling to entertain the idea that there could be more planets 😂

(Hey, Vethe. If you’re in Celestiar, then WHAT PLANET ARE YOU ON? lol)

Vethe

Vethe glanced at Marcurious. “How can I trust you?” She asked the King, “You have given me no reason to believe that you would be telling the truth. Aside from the fact that you want us to murder these Lillenings.” She narrowed her eyes at the King. “Which honestly gives me even less reason to trust you.”

@rae

There’s twelve, not seven planets, but that can be easily edited so it’s not a problem.

@thearcaneaxiom

Do it lol

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else

So here’s the first chapter of my revisions to the Andromeda book…ready for critiquing!

Chapter 1: New Beginnings

Newborn light sifted between the windows, piercing the darkness.

Through the smudged glass, Sef could see the Andromedan sunrise, she could see the indigo trees dancing as the wind pushed them…[Read more]

@power

I like it! very intriguing!

@jonas

Okay, sounds good!

@rae

Awww thanks!

Yeah ik, idk how to start it tho lok

@rae

Cumberbatch is just one of a very select few actors I actually know the names of, in most cases I’d be clueless, lol!

@savannah_grace2009 @jonas @rae

This is making me want to share audio samples, lol!

I didn’t know about the Gollum juice, but it makes sense. Smaug was played by Benedict Cumberbatch.