KydonAndWillow

@jonas

I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.

I’m gonna get an epic Jonas eyeroll for this one hehehe…

@jonas

Sorry, Dalton has been taken by the protection squad, where he will be supplied with copious amounts of tea and therapy.

@hybridlore

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s a second book I don’t think it’s a big problem.

I agree, the ending is abrupt, but I’m not sure how to make it any less so. It just kinda m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t have much to add, since I basically agree with Hybridlore and Jonas. Soo… yeah, other than the points mentioned, it looks good to me… 😄

@keilah-h

Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.

There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…

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You, not out. Idk how I did that.

@rae

What I’ve learned is that pretty much anything out can imagine is a name in some language 😅

@keilah-h

I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]

Those two… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty! Here it is! (:

Everton

Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.

Oh… this place again… He had been here before. Wasn’t sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.

He mutte…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

N’nesha

Uvah had Bucky sit, working on his wound. I paced back and forth.

Neshe: We need to get out of here.

Nele: Where even is “here”?

I decided to explore the room, feeling around the walls. Wood touched my fingers, and specks of light shown through the cracks. A window.

Neshe: This could be a good…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! Sounds good! I’ll get to writing their first RP later this afternoon, but feel free to do one before me. (:

@freedomwriter76

Aww 😢 Poor boi. He needs hugs. 🥺

@loopylin

Oh my word, I love that. 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Poor guy…. 🥺💛

I love the quote about trust…

@freedomwriter76

Thanks!! 😊

(ApPaReNtLy I’vE aLrEaDy SaId ThAt… So It DiDn’T sEnD… lol) 

@freedomwriter67

Here’s the last post, and I made sure there wasn’t any after that, it was around page 417:

@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22

I decided I needed to stop procrastinating and continue before I getting prodded again, sorry it’s a little short😅

N’nesha

“…Let me handle this.” I heard Bucky say. I lay, stunned……

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