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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
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NEXT SECTION!
The weeks passed, and Joseph lived through them in a blur of joy and excitement. He and Amelia had many wonderful conversations with her parents, and even some between just the two of them. They worked together when they could and enjoyed obs…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Maybe I’ll send Barnes in your direction, since she’s a good tracker and has a soft spot for teens in trouble.
@loopylin
…I’ve been avoiding Seb for a while now. You know how sometimes you canonically change a character, but you don’t like to change them in an ongoing roleplay because it would be too confusing? It’s the same thing with…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Oh just wait, this is going to be spinning circles in Rory’s head now.
Rory
Rory let out a breath of relief and followed Leo toward the back door. Leo opened it and checked both ways before slipping outside, Silvia beside him. Rory paused and turned one lingering look back on the church. Then, he turned and hurried after Leo and the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
I know. I’m really liking where this is going tho.
Rory
Rory sniffed, looking at the ground. He could feel Quincy’s arms around him, and he hugged the boy tighter to his chest, nearly suffocating him. He laid a hand over Quincy’s head as if to shield him from something unseen.”I… I’m sorry Leo. I didn’t mean to lose it like that,”…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Rory
“Special?” Rory looked back at Leo, an expression of bitter surprise on his face. “Who says we’re special?” He shook his head, his throat tightening. “Only those who can get there way to the top of the government chain are ‘special’ and even then they can become unspecial pretty quick.” His voice was strained. “There’s nothing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed    SNOWBALL! 15x
@elishavet-pidyon    SNOWBALL 15x
And. Hmmm.
@koshka   SNOWBALL! 5x
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Rory slowly shook his head. “Rescue us? From the Government?” He gave a short of laugh that ended more like a choked sob. “He can’t. One man against the Agents? And a shepherd no less?”
Rory bit his lip. Tears were stinging his eyes, and he didn’t know why. For one moment, looking up at that picture in the glass, he had felt safe. For…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Thank you for snowballing me and sorry if I missed one of you! (And sorry it took so long for me to reply 😭😭) Finally getting around to this… lol. @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @whalekeeper
Little bit more than 500 words but I had to finish the scene : )
Oh, and you probably know Liz as Liv (The scientist from my wip OLH) I had to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @&c.
Welp. It was actually rather difficult, but it came together quickly in the end.
*bows*
This is Aiche, one of the king’s shepherds. He’s got a lot on his mind, but there’s hope yet. There’s always hope.
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I meant the latter.
Wait what I was kidding. I didn’t think you actually…
*eyes the massive pile of snow balls*
But I might as well enjoy this 😈
@koshka x2
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@koshka Do your characters need assistance? U’m kind of bored right now, so punching something would bring me joy.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Where are we in terms of distance from the school? Are you guys intending to disappear or…? XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Yes he is! he’s such a darling.
Rory
Rory paused and looked about, his eyes wide. There was something about this place. It wasn’t just the quiet and sense of protection. No, there was… peace. Yes, that was it. Peace. Something Rory had never truly felt.
Leo was moving forward, saying something about the back door, but Rory stood…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
So fun to hear from you on this!!
Yes, I know! The kids are so fun!
Hmmm, I might add more to the “knowing look” lol.
Well, with this I wanted each one of them to say a prayer. With big things in our family we normally all go around and say a prayer. Sometimes though, just one family remember prays. It really all depends on…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
OK! Here’s 70 words from your new favorite story. Happy now? XD
It was a simple breakfast of apples, flat bread, and a strong, white cheese. It would have been scorned by her foster mother, but oh, how good it was! And as she ate, Aiche told her stories of the things he had seen in the hills. They were curious stories that sent a tingle…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Ok. Here is 100 words exactly. Only 50 more to go! Beware.
There was something mysterious about the Grey Wood. Viktor tugged a fern straight and watched it spring back into a tight curl the moment he released it. The undergrowth was deep enough to hide anything. Animals, people, or castles.Â
Nadian’s shriek echoed behind him. Vi…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Here’s an aesthetic for Project Golden Songs, my new WIP. (It’s the one with the shepherd Aiche) (boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD) I’m not dumping my other two, just trying to get this written.
Meet Elline, daughter of kings. She’s had a rough time of it, but she’s made of sterner stuff than most think.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh my goodness. I can’t believe you just handed a kid to Rory. *silently dies* this is going to be great!
He needs something to fight for beyond his own survival.
Ummm….. whatever you would rather. i don’t care. Leo is leading which means you’re picking.
Rory
There coming. there’s no escape. there never is! Rory couldn’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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The next morning, Julian and Leon left to start another journey. They wouldn’t be returning to the capital, so Joseph sent no return letter to Sabina.
Joseph walked with the two former soldiers outside the gates of the town. It was good to be with old friends.…
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