@koshka
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka ohh this is so awesome! I’m loving it so far.
Most of my characters are a too little unhinged for me to trust them showing up at my house lol
but maybe I’d manage to stop them from blowing something up before all was said and done
If only by threatening them with “I’m the author, I can erase you from existence as…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
thanks for filling me in. 🙂
Np
Ben
“Of course, always will appreciate any help. My friend Rax is a pyromancer, meaning he has the power of fire. Sometimes his pyromantic side kicks in and his loving side is almost non-existent, which I pray has not happened. Oh, right I have a tracker!” Ben takes the large backpack, which is…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @whalekeeper @koshka
Rax
Stops firing, many of the inflammable (inflammable really means flammable, look at part 4 the Element of Style by William Strunk Jr. and EB White) objects in the room are set afire. He looks around and sees what he has done, the smile that was on his face disappeared. Looking down on the ground in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
If you are really interested in understanding the fight, go to page 416 and read about anything that has to do with Rory, Leo, or Agents. If not, then Rax did an okay of explaining. There are plenty of other characters who refuse to get involved in the fight at this point.
Poor Alpha. When Rory finds out about this,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @whalekeeper
Alpha
Alpha sat down, leaning his back against the wall. His breath came quick and short. “Eh, not too bad. I’m not in as much pain as you’re probably thinking I am. And the injury itself isn’t the worst I’ve had. It’s deep, sure, but the worst injury is a possible punctured lung.” Alpha gathered…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Marcel
“So… They went for me, because they want him, because they want his brother, because they want you. What’s your name?”
“Rory.”
Marcel thought on this for a second. He took Rory’s hand and swung it up and down, an exhausted shake. “Nice to meet you.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
*dissolves into a jumble of joy bubbles*
It’s the little Natan boy! Awwwww.
Another great example on how to make a character sympathetic, despite being “cold as the alps.” XD
Also one of the worst heartbreaks I’ve had over a character. Thank you for reminding me.
*sniff*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Rory
Rory glanced over at Leo. He could see Marcel was in pain and it was taring him up inside. “Marcel, this wasn’t about Quincy.” He paused, wondering how much to say with the little boy in the room. Finally, he took a deep breath. “They kidnapped Quincy to get at Leo because he’s hiding me from them and they know it.…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Yep
Marcel
“Sure I do.”
“What happened?”
“A bunch of guys started stalking the kid. Didn’t like that.” Marcel paused to hiss through his teeth, and lightly relaxed his wings. “I would have stuck with normal street fighting, but they kept coming so I had to improvise.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Not a lot I can do without Koshka as she makes up half the room.
Rory
Rory quickly pushed Marcel back down. “Stay put and don’t move. You got hit by something. I think it was Quincy’s shield.”
He glanced over at Leo for confirmation, but Leo was rummaging about in his fist aid kit for something.
Rory turned back to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
I did not intend for my character to get this hurt. 😂 I anticipate he will be very chill about the whole thing and probably skip hospital. Even if that’s a poor decision.
Marcel
Voices rose and moved. Marcel opened his eyes; the fuzzy light of an electric bulb hung over the couch he lay on. He didn’t have the best…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Rory
Rory looked from Marcel to Leo, trying to read the young man’s face. Is he going to make it? Rory wanted to scream the question, but he remained silent. I can’t watch someone else innocent die because of something I did… or didn’t do.
“Is he okay?” Quincy whispered, wispy eyebrows trembling.
Rory swallowed hard and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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Kefa replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 3 months ago
Hey thanks for Answering the Q and A!
If you mean Queen Elizabeth I ABSOLUTELY. She killed Mary Queen of Scott’s, and Lady Jane Grey, and had some really weird things going on in court, plus a bunch of other stuff.
If you mean some other Elizabeth…No?
Sorry…. wrong answer…
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Kefa replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 3 months ago
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Kefa replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 3 months ago
Hey Ellette! Let me just say we have A LOT in common especially with the history stuff (like the dates).
Um, Christianity. Do you mean “what is your denomination”? If so, I’m reformed Baptist.
yeah sorry im not the greatest with getting the word I mean accurately idk.
It would help if I knew who Elizabeth was……….…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
What happened?
We’re in the elevator but it’s far from over.
*sigh* please don’t make me commit arson with my Agents just to bring you guys back.
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Kefa replied to the topic hello in the forum Start HERE 3 months ago
Hallo Koska, great to meet you! I love all the kinds of writing you do! I especially relate to the poem one. And I’m for some random reason obsessed with history, I just get so many ideas from it.
1) Should bullet points use numbers, numerals, or letters?
I can just tell your creative based on all the ways you did the bullet points! And…[Read more]
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