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whaley started the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 7 months ago
How do you want to improve?
(To be clear, choose a couple writing skills you want to improve, or a bad habit, and explain!)I’m pretty good at writing things in an abnormal way (such as strange metaphors), but I don’t think abnormality is definitely, certainly, indubitably good. It can be confusing. It’s often detail-oriented, without giving the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP
Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.
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whaley replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
*is in bliss*
XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.
The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.
Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!
That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3
I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.
So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.
Maybe page 14?
I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, I did get a feeling he didn’t love what he was doing when he was talking with Cole.
Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!
So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job?
I knew he did something with technology and people, and I knew he worked with the government. This didn’t come as a surprise to me at all. It was good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
GIRL!
How do you do it?!?!
I am so hooked! OH MY WORD! I want this made into a MOVIE!!
Wow! This is so cool. I’m worried about Everett! I hope he makes it out of this one okay. What I wouldn’t give to be in his head as he reads through all those questions!!
AND ALEC!!! Oh my word! This is great!!
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕
Hopefully we can have her come check on it if its still acting up.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*Scream of pleasure!!!*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑
*indignant sniff*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey! It works now
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
Sounds good.
*eyes you suspiciously*
*grins evilly*
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Does KP work for anyone?
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Andrew posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
Testing, one, two, three. Does KP work?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh good. It’s been glitching all morning on my end.
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
You 100% are!!
When did Leon start calling the governor Walter? I was a bit confused, but I probably just missed the part where you introduced him.
When the governor told him to. XD
It happened when they were looking over t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey, I’m looking to get a job as a developmental editor/proofreader. Would I be allowed to reference The Narrow Path Trilogy as one of the things I worked on? I can give the full title and your name, or I could do something like TNPT by ____ (whatever name you want me to use, etc.
If not, that’s totally fine. I’m just looking…[Read more] - Load More

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