Koshka

*Subscribes* I’ll comment more on this later, but I need to sleep.

I don’t want to skip Barnes’ class, or her own exhaustion will be all for naught.

@koshka @raxforge @loopylin

Sorry guys, this is all on me. I’ll try to move the scene forward after a good sleep. (It’s night here.) I’ve been sick for a while and it takes a long time for my sleep cycle to recover, so I’m always tired. O⁠_⁠o

@koshka @loopylin

What do we need to do to move our scene (if you want to call it that) forward?

@ellette-giselle

may I ask how Mateo is doing?

Someone has way too much time on their hands, lol

!!! PROGRAM HACKED!!!

“Welcome, my tater-tot munchers.

Today, we have been prosecuted by the world. Those who believe our cause to be tasteless have cast an iron grip upon our communications. They broadcast to all, painting us as villains for liking quality food.

Today, I ask you to rise up. This world is in need of a revolution. Eat mashed p…[Read more]

I need to write too. XD

Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AHH! Godly is here!

*Hugs*

What do we have here? A November scene?!

*Excited reading*

*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*

Who is this creep?

*plots to cause him destruction*

*finishes reading*

Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.

Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]

I still really like the name A’Grend for a kingdom

@godlyfantasy12 Notifs have been really bad, so I’ll notif you here. I messaged you on my profile :]

@godlyfantasy12

I’m glad to see you writing again! Sometimes it can feel like such a chore. ❤️ But I think it just takes some time. I’ve also been helping Loops (a teensy-weensy bit) and I’ve thought about reading through the whole roleplay. Even if we weren’t the best writers, and we still aren’t, it’s still fun.

@linus-smallprint

I’m going to try and look at all of this when possible.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the extra ideas. I bet I can make a list of things to focus on with line thickness.

Nice drawing!! I always like how dedicated you are with the textures, such as the wood and brick floor. that takes more patience than I have at this time.
I agree with Keilah on both those points. Another thing – Alan’s left arm might…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ha!

That’s kind of funny, but Julian would KILL anyone who did that to him.

Plus it seems a little cliched.

BUT, it was funny. XD

@linus-smallprint

Got it.