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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Okay, okay, he’s making an almost funny jab at things. So, backstory:
most of the time when he tries to do things like speak out against something that Disney did that was really wrong, (like making movies where homosexual relationships are encouraged) or saying that this or that was wrong that so and so did, or anything like that,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@linus-smallprin
YIKES! You changed your pic!
I was like, who is talking to me?
haha, maybe it is a bit dramatic, but I like mine better.
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
I don’t really care for this term. Nothing against you, but some people have used it in some rather…. degrading ways around me. Basically saying that my faith had nothing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Hello! Hello!
Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)
Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.
Yes, I am going for a darker stage.
Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I finished school this morning. I get up at five to do it and I work fast, Reading and writing are a strong point of mine, and I have a lot of that. I normally finish around ten.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon sighed, his stiff posture relaxing slightly. “I don’t know who they are. But you seem like you’re in trouble.” He took a step forward. “I don’t want to drive you away. I would much rather help you, and perhaps fight beside you against whatever hunts you, b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon’s tone matched the stern look on his face. “Then I suggest you leave. If you are not willing to take a risk and trust people, yet you are willing to take the risk of attacking someone you don’t even know, then you need to stay away. I will not have you ki…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon rolled to his feet, the dagger still in his hand. Julian scrambled up and lunged at Brutus, but Leon yanked him back. “Good Lord, he’s something else.”
Carefully Leon moved to place himself between Brutus and Ben. “Everyone needs to calm down.” He pointed at B…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle started the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
HELLO!!!
So excited because today is November and now I can release the beginning of the second book in my saga!
(tagging a few others who might have been reading the first one. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon)
Again, this is in draft form still, so feedback and critiques are welcome.
The Veil of Night
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
“Hey, get off of him!” Julian yelled, rushing at Brutus. He crashed into the young man, Knocking him against the wall.
In a flash, Leon was at his side, dagger poised. “What is going on with you? Stop attacking innocent people!”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
(Okay, that is so funny what Baron just said, because of something that happens later……..)
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Julian smiled sheepishly. “Leon’s said something like that a few times.” He was feeling completely relaxed. Brutus didn’t seem to be a threat at all.
Leon gave Brutus a stiff nod. “I’m Leon.”
At t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon raised an eyebrow. “Listen here, I think you should be the first to–”
Julian cut him off. “I’m Julian Damoss,” he said, offering his hand. “That’s Leon. Don’t mind him, he’s normally not this snappish.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Elsa is a Disney icon (with a lot of bad messages) She and all of New Disney aught to have it’s face burned off.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon let go of his sword with his right hand, but continued to rest his left hand on the hilt. “I don’t know. Why should we trust you?” He turned. “Come on Julian, let’s go.”
Julian raised an eyebrow. “And leave him to follow us and stab us in the back? No thanks.”
Leon glared at him. “You r…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Above is a little bit or arson I 100% support!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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