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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
yeah, I can close off the week gap. I might say “a day or two” or something like that. Would this be better.
I think you meant to say someone else’s voice.
Ah, yes, I do. thanks.
Poor Joseph. I would be a little curious to know what it was like for him when he lost his own father. Does he ever see his face in the n…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.
don’t even get me started.
With Alan down, he would probably try to step in and would not be willing in the least be to let Rour go. So Rour isn’t in a winning position yet. Do you have any ideas for this?
Hmm……
Let’s see.
Well, would Stripe care to protect Alan? I didn’…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle and Loopy are now friends 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Do you know when the registration opens? I can’t seem to find anything besides dates for 2025.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
btw, I told mom you had met Doug, and were from around there, and she was like “Oh my goodness! Did you tell were our family LOVES all the stuff down there!?”
We are looking into the Called Conference right now. Thank you for telling me about it, because I’ll barely squeak in before I’m too old!
this is pretty crazy to me. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I feel kinda bad for traumatizing this child.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Alright, I will.
Shorter section, but I want to make sure Joseph is making sense and his character is developing well before I post more.
A week passed.
For Joseph, it was a time of raw pain. He had always been shy and quiet, but now he seemed even more so. He seemed older than his years, and…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh that sounds amazing!!! Oh I would love, love, love that! If I do go down there someday, would you be willing to meet me?
How old is the age cut-off?
Do you know the dates?
Does it cost?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh I know that. I just think it’s so cool that you’ve seen them in person!
You should go to called conference. You’d love it
To what conference?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
What do you mean by that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
So do you still live around there?
Were you ever at one of his Sabbath dinners?
have you met THEE Nate Wilson?
Or Brian Cole?
Or Rachel and Becka?
Oh, or Christine Cohen!!!???
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I mean, didn’t you used to think, when you were a little kid, that your dad was equal to super man, and your mom was flawless? (I sure did)
Now that we’re older, we can understand that they are just human, but when we are young, mom and dad can do anything and they’ve never once done something wrong in their lives.
The adults…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
It benefits you, the reader.
We know Aaron was not the perfect man Joseph thought he was.
We now know Sabina is not the strong, fearless young woman that Joseph thinks she is.
We can see the flaws in Joseph’s thinking, and understand them, but they are flaws.
Plus, I can’t go kill the poor thing’s Fiance without giving…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
He’s kinda one of my heroes. I love his stuff, and his attitude, and….. well…… I buy almost all my books from Canon and have the canon app, and have always wanted to go to Moscow Idaho to visit him. (And also talk to Nate, but I’d have to be ready to have my books destroyed. lol)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Uh, I may just have to die on this hill. I really, really need that scene.
It will become clear as soon as the next few scenes are posted.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Yep! He’s an amazing guy! And very chill and funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
WAIT! DOUG WILSON was your pastor!!!!
No way!!!
I have always dreamed of meeting him in person!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Just look it up and watch from 2018 to now. They each have a little piece of backstory, if you want to know.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
AW! Thank you so much!!!!
I’ll make sure to tag you as I add more!
Would you like a brief summery of the last book, or do you just want to figure things out from here?
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