Koshka

@r-m-archer

Oh, that’s a great article! Thank you for sharing. It gave me several ideas. (As did your article on false religions, which I read right after that one.)

Also, it’s so good to see you around here again!

@whalekeeper

Well, everyone made theirs much less complicated than what I was thinking, so I’m glad I waited. lol. I think I basically agree with what the others have said. I do like a first person narrative, if it’s well done and really used to contribute to the texture of the story.

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@elishavet-pidyon

Still haven’t got proof that she’s alive.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Y’all are terrible. 🤣

@liberty

• He’s a rolling stone/without roots/drifter.
• He’s curious about things.
• He likes to work with wood/whittle.
• He’s a messenger, or somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle.
• He’s either a strategist, or stuck in a tight situation.
• Despite his youth and friendly demeanor, he can fight like a cat.
• He’s more of the…

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I’m gonna do Rax, but this is going to be him after the events that happen in story that I’m writing.

1. What is your full name?

“Lord Rax Forge.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

Rax grins, almost chuckling to himself, “Well, I am the Pyromancer. The wielder of fire.”

3. What is your body language…

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@whalekeeper

“Even for kings he comes”

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

I finished another character yesterday! He was a lot of fun…

Any thoughts/guesses on what this fellow is like?

@koshka

You alive?

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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@whalekeeper

This is a great topic! I’ll have to think about it though.

By the by, I don’t see duplicate posts. 🙂

@linus-smallprint

I’ve been commenting on the proton one. I hope you’re getting those……

@whalekeeper

I’m down to do something like this.

And any baptism in the name of the father, son, and holy spirit is a valid baptism.

What is the name of the Son? 😉

@whalekeeper

That’s awesome! If you guys have any questions just let me know. And if you you guys are confused about the rules in the middle of a game/session, just make it up so that it can keep the game moving. It’s better to have fun making up rules than spending 30 minutes trying to find a rule like; how high you can jump standing still or…[Read more]