Koshka

@loopylin

Sure, go right ahead! Leo’s never seen an alien before, so that could get interesting (he’ll probably just think he’s seeing things at first).

@freed_and_redeemed

I think, content wise, they are young adult, even if you could appeal to an older audience as well.

@loopylin

Yes! Leo needs help. He’s not a plumber (obviously.).

Leo

This crawlspace may not have been the smallest thing he’d squeezed into, but it was clearly trying. He slid a little farther on his back, boots scuffing over the damp the floor. He shifted a bit to try and ease a cramp in his soaked back.

And there it was, showing ghostly white in the light of his head lamp. A broken pipe.

He closed his…[Read more]

And that was way longer than I anticipated in the document. *Sigh*

Okay, these two are from a recent WIP my sister and I started. It’s sci-fish which is definitely not my typical, but has been fun to play with.

Leo Boltman (Leoron Benneck)

He’s just been hired at the school as a maintenance repairman and electrician. He’s hoping to find a good school for his sister and sort-of-adopted little brother, where the…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Sniffle*

I think I love Erich now.

Do y’all mind if I jump back into this RP? I’d be bringing in a character from a newish WIP (not the original set I had way back in the beginning of the school).

@whalekeeper

Oooof, those are such a pain. I think I basically starved myself for a day and a half after one set.

(seriously considering sticking a couple charies in as I’m not in any other RPs)

@whalekeeper

Oouch. Wisdom teeth?

@freed_and_redeemed

*Just now getting around to responding to your Riker scene*

There’s hope! He’s finally seeing a bit of real light, even if it’s just a spark. Poor guy still needs tea and cookies. And maybe a Bible study.

Thank you so much for sharing! I loved reading through that scene.

@rae

I’ve never heard of that site, or really any site for cover making. Guess I haven’t been looking. XD

I’ve used Photoshop or Canva to design working covers before, and I’ve been satisfied enough with that (especially Photoshop, but I just like playing with that thing).

If you want tips for making a good cover design, I’d say start by…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad it was helpful! (Am more than mildly curious who this character will be)

Gracious, I don’t like this guy. Or Riker’s father much either. They’re…slimy. *stalks out of room*

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.

So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.

Also, I…[Read more]

If someone ever makes their tag line something like @everyone-else or @anyone-who-reads-this I already pity them.

@elishavet-pidyon

They got us alright.

(Also, @AllOtherKeepers Hi y’all! I’m haven’t croaked yet, praise the Lord.)