Keilah H.

@rae

It was really good! I liked the scene a lot. I would really like to see the previous scene where the fight/killing happened. It would help straighten out the dialogue. You see, Misty thinks Tenz is wrong, Tenz thinks he;’s right. Roan, (who I don’t think saw much) is loyally siding with his sister. However, we don’t have the actual facts. It…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeppers, we know each other irl. ;] Calvin goes to a sister church’s church plant. Which I guess means he goes to a niece church. @calyhuge what do you think of this term?

@keilah-h @rae

Sniper switched to a gun and aimed into the forest. “Silvanis, how large is this creature, and is there more than one?”

“About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.” Silvanis answered. Dary? Haven’t heard of that place before.

“About this high and this wide.” Fairy showed the size with her hands. “Oh this’ll be a goo…[Read more]

@keilah-h

in a way, we do… we talk about strange things, like family and story characters

@keilah-h

Silvanis

Silvanis  looked again. “About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.”

At Sniper’s visible confusion, Fairy motioned with her hands. “About this high and this wide.”

Not gonna say anythin’ exact since you have an idea, just know Dary rats are HUGE.

@savannah_grace2009 I have a Tenz scene!

@ellette-Giselle @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @whoever

It’s not that great, so don’t go in expecting much

Tenz brought his knees up to his chest, resting his cheeks on his patella’s, and wrapping his arms around his legs. His large, childish eyes looked from Roan resting on t…

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Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.

@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom

Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.

@ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @grcr @keilah-h @anyone-I-missed Thank you all for your kind words💖 And I’m happy to hear about everyone’s writing progress! <3 And even if your writing progress is slow, don’t worry, everything will come together in God’s perfect timing💖 And everyone will know when Freedom’s Fire is released, don’t worry :3 @whaleke…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Chase scene sounds great.

@rae @keilah-h

 Trevor

As the group proceeded into the forest, Trevor thought he heard something rustling in the leaves, then a twig snapping. “Did anyone else hear that?” Everi, one of the men in the group, asked. We’re being followed. Trevor thought, and a smile crept over his face. “I hear…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h

Perfect! And maybe when they start running for their lives (or fight it, either way) They stumble upon this pavilion place, that was mentioned? Just to keep this going, but it also makes sense if the other group finds that

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @freed_and_redeemed

Btw, I thought I’d tag a few people and mention that I’ve been sketching characters if anyone is interested. I started the forum here.

Character Sketches

I…[Read more]

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, the characters are from the prologue and Chapter I shared. As for quotes, I actually don’t find it hard to come up with them at all. I just th9ink of the characters and the quotes come.

@freed_and_redeemed

Freedom’s Fire, which also features Riker/Leon as the MCs, is set to hopefully publish this Summer 👀

OH Y…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @rae

When you plan to RP and then get slapped by life….

😭So sorry guys

I’ll be gone for the next two weeks, but I’ll try to do a quick one

Mind if I throw in an animal chase or something?

EVERI

The man named Sniper led them towards the forest, leaving half the group behind. Everi far preferred this op…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol yeah

Trevor

“Since most of ya didn’t look like you wanted to go lookin’ for beetle grubs, we’ll be huntin’ mammal prey. Do all of ya know ‘ow to do that?” Sniper asked as he led Trevor and the group through the forest.

“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Silvanis answered, and Trevor watched his face turn red. He tried his b…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow

Silvanis

“Fairy doesn’t, but I can teach her.” Color rushed to Silvanis’s face as he realized how quickly he had said that. He looked away as he saw her eyes on him.

Sorry that’s it’s so short, not sure exactly what else to write.

UPDATE TIME

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator @rae @princesachronicle22

If it’s okay, I’m going to write an RP.

Trevor

“Good idea. Hey, Huntress, ya coming with us?” Sniper said. “I think I’ll stay here.” Huntress replied.

“Fine with me.” Sniper gestured for Trevor, Azalea, and the others that were going with him to follow.

“Ready to find out what’s going on her…[Read more]

That reminds me @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h

Are you guys still in this rp, or have you decided to drop out?

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome!! I’ll tag a few more of you too.

@stephie @theshadow @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed

OK all, how is this for a story starter? I want to honestly know if it catches y’all attention.

 
Prologue
7/10/2065
 

Night had fallen over the capital…[Read more]