@keilah-h
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon sorry for the late reply!
ooh…this oughta be fun…XD
Nyx
Zlatan was approaching him, reaching out to try and touch him.
Absolutely not!
He hissed, reeling from the man.
Zlatan frowned. “I’m not going to hurt you.” His eyes went to Nyx’s paw, making Nyx shuffle it, trying to hide it.
This,…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
November knelt beside him, and Viktor realized the other boy was trembling.
“Umm…” Viktor winced as November’s voice cracked. “A-Are you oh kay?”
Not the most logical question, but it made Riker smile, which was good. Viktor glanced at November to see the boy’s hand unconsciously steal up to je…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
The fox sat glaring at him, one paw held at an awkward angle.
Ah Nyx…
Zlatan stepped closer, trying to see what was wrong with the forepaw, but Nyx hissed and twitched away, hackles raised.
“I’m not going to hurt you.” He stepped back satisfied in a rather unsatisfactory way. “You need a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
November
November paled and he felt his heart drop into his stomach.
Mikkel want him to help? The boy who couldn’t do anything right? The boy who, at the mere sight of blood, nearly lost his lunch?
“It’s alright. Just talk to him.” Mikkel smiled, obviously noting November’s grim expressio…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 also…I’m thinking something will need to be done about Nyx’s injury….like it’ll have to be wrapped or something but that ain’t gonna happen easily XD.
so….I think it’s finally time in a minute to….have him talk to Eva and Zlatan (GASHP)
he’ll be the one to initiate it obviously lol!) but after y’all’s next RPs in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
Amidst his panicking thoughts, November reached a point where he thought he might vomit.
Until he heard his name.
It was Riker.
He was…checking on him.
Despite his own injury.
November stared in awe, a lump forming in his throat. He blinked, tears sprouting from his e…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Eva stood in the middle of a room. Zlatan quickly wiped clean his blade, stuffing the oil cloth back into it’s place. He sheathed his sword before coming into the room.
A golden fluff ball curled up in her arms.
Nyx.
Oy this fox was not happy to see him.
Zlatan closed the door behind him,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Nyx“What’s wrong, darling?” Eva’s voice was soothing, but Nyx felt himself grow a bit agitated.
Why did she keep calling him that?!
Only Lyn could call him that! And she was not Lyn! Where was Lyn!
He shut his eyes, turning his head away as his paw jostled slightly. He let out a hiss of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
The stair has been dark, crowded, filled with bloodthirst.
He had tried his best, but his best wasn’t much. And as even as he hated to admit it, everything he’d been taught in fighting had fled at the sight of the dogs.
Maybe if he’d been older, more weapon wise, he could have held the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
”Vat now?”
Jocelyn stared at their small group.
”Really?!” Franz gruffed. “You’re asking a bunch of children?”
Alyona winced slightly. Lyn scrunched her nose.
Ignoring him entirely, she turned to Alyona, “Any ideas where your brother would go after everything dies down? You know…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
His sword was messy now, but he didn’t stop to clean it even though the sounds of pursuit had died to a patter.
Let the rest to have made it to safety.
Zlatan kept climbing stairs, checking rooms. Two levels. Three.
Vulkasin
Lyn and Altona stared at him, worry plain on their…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
You guys have no idea how THRILLED, how SHISHCOMBOODLED I am about this. Seriously, I’ve never written either of my characters in these situations.
Alyona
Seven feet of young man rolled onto the roof. Alyona’s mind, still trapped in the rooms below them, struggled to comprehend what she was…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on and wanna RP? Cuz I wanna RP some more XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
NOOOO RIKER!!!!!!!
November
Blood.
Riker was bleeding.
November’s stomach churned at the sight and he paled. He took a step back as Viktor and Mikkel rushed forward.
Riker’s eyelids flitted open and shut, and November frowned.
He once again felt useless. But what could he do? Hop…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Arabella
No…no! This..this wasn’t right!
Her eyes watered as Ezra led her away. She could hear Naja crying beside her, followed by a whimpering Jareth.
The sounds broke her heart.
Once they’d reached a certain point, Ezra released her. She’d expected herself to bolt. To run back toward t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Good job! As its only first draft, I swap out all ‘w’s and ‘th’s as they aren’t a sound in Russian.
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Was the man crazy?!
No, he was an officer, just like Zlatan himself. First in attack last in retreat. In better circumstances two officers would both give all the information…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
RIKER!!! NO THEY WILL NOT!!! 😭😭
Nyx
Someone was holding him. Close.
”Stay with me, darling.” The voice cooed.
Lyn…?
It didn’t sound like Lyn…didn’t smell like her either.
But….whoever it was didn’t smell dangerous either.
They smelled…sweet. Like chocolate…
Nyx’s ears bent. Why was ev…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Nyx
Nyx’s senses were on high alert from moment one.
He’d smelled the dogs and guards before they ever entered. Sadly, he hadn’t had time to warn anyone. They were on them in a matter of seconds.
Nyx had leapt at the first thing to enter the door; one of the dogs.
It was much bigger then…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Jocelyn
It had taken Lyn only seconds to realize Nyx wasn’t with her.
She’d been pushed out the door by someone; she wasn’t sure who. But as she climbed the stairs behind Alyona, she had realized with a terrible start that the usual ball of fluff around her neck was nowhere to be found…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
ZlatanThe bay of a war dog. One small mark on time. Instant chaos in the ranks.
Hateful chaos and disorder.
The Desanik in Zlatan took over.
The tower door had been cleared, their paths somehow traced. By the sound at least half a dozen guards were already inside.
No time left.…[Read more]
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