@keilah-h
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Paxton’s eyes ticked from side to side, but his legs refused to move. Refused to run. And suddenly he felt himself pulled backwards once again by his clothing.
He wrestled slightly, until a voice he knew didn’t belong to the woman whispered, “Paxton.”
He stopped. The voice was still r…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h sorry your response didn’t load until just now. I’m glad that’s helpful!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h Ok I googled hobbit height and it said the average is 3’6” so there ya go
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Oh no… decisions…. 0~0
Both groups would be awesome, so you can just do whichever characters you want to write more.😁 (lol sorry I honestly can’t decide)@keilah-h I get a little confused with numbers, so I don’t know the girls’ exact heights, so I just always say that they’re hobbit-sized.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
The boy was trapped…
And apparently, so was the group.
He caught eyes with Leo, who looked just at lost as Paxton felt. He tried to give an encouraging nod, but it fell a bit short.
Paxton frowned, shivering.
He could hear whispers, could see the man named Crosshair and one of n…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 back from our fellowship at church!! It was fun!! Is anyone on? And does anyone else have night services too?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 FRIDA…. 😤 @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
His face burned as Frida’s skin touched his cheek. He let out a cry, the force turning his head. He whimpered, crying silently.
He could hear the boys yelling behind him, but over his beating heart he couldn’t make out what they were saying.
And a few quick fists again…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ellie
“What planet are you from?”
“We’re not from any planet in particular, we travel,” Eddie answered, “But we’re Qilanans from the Zelcin star system. Though, I’m guessing since I have never heard of Mandalore, this probably means nothing to you.”
Ellie continued to study Kad while the others talked, not paying m…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
Everything had quieted for a moment. He’d been wrapped up in warm arms. The brothers held him close…
And then….
The warmth was gone.
Cold fingers gripped him, prying him from Wolfgang’s arm’s.
“Let go of him!” Wolfgang cried as Paxton was forcefully tugged forward, into…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon hola friends!! How was church?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 THESE PEOPLE ARE CREEPS!!!! 😤 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
The woman turned on him in a heartbeat, a vicious smile on her face. She’s told him to stop…to let go.
But he couldn’t…
He just…couldn’t….
He cried harder, and it was almost as if no longer was it a stranger standing before him, but his own mother.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka XD! Ahh but poor Zlatan!! And Vulk be upseeeet (I am too Vulk…for Zlatan…)
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx
“Only fools and madmen are fearless, lad.” Was Zlatan’s reply, his face looking so much like Grimm that Nyx couldn’t help the flare of annoyance in his chest.
He growled then huffed, the tips of his ears ti…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOO!!! I think the slap from Frida is what is gonna get to Paxton…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
He let out a shriek as the first brother attacked, punching Leo, sending him to the floor.
The other went after Reuben, but Jakob stopped him.
It was all downhill from there…
The older bro…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h not entirely sure what else to make Paxton say.
Paxton
Leo stood tall. Strong, despite the evil look in his brothers’ eyes. In his mother’s gaze…
Paxton’s breath hitched.
Would he ever be that brave?
He perked up at Wolfgang who seemed…Frozen.
“W-Wolfgang…?” He whispered. No answer. Gent…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon hola!! I’m headed to a rally thing but wanted to see if anyone was on right now.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHH!! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben…Wolfgang…Leo…Jakob…Joshua…
They knew these people…
These…evil looking people…
Paxton gasped as he remembered what Wolfgang had told him before.
How they understood…understood what he’d been through….
Paxton’s eyes widened, fear gripping him. He looked up at Wolfgang,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHH!!! I have a feeling if they start beating up the bois Paxton might try to speak up “
*emphasis on try* my little shy guy…
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Feather didn’t get to respond before….
Yells..
Screams.
Begging.
Paxton’s blood ran cold.
Had his brothers come back? Found someone to torment?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h u want to go?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
hey y’all I’m changing a little something with Paxton’s appearance but it’s not noticeable so it shouldn’t really affect anything! But when I created his son (yes I’ve thought that far ahead XD) I realized I luv this idea way more then my originals so….
instead of just having small…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ur poor charries!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben was smiling sweetly, comfortingly.
“It’s not your fault, Paxton. Not your fault at all.”
Warmth flutter through his heart and he smiled. A voice caught his attention and he jerked slightly, realizing whoever was speaking, was speaking to him.
It was t…[Read more]
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