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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.
Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
100%
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freedom replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @rae @mineralizedwritings
anyone wanna do a small challenge? 👀
(you don’t have to do all of them: do as many as you want✨)
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @loopylin @rae @anyone-else-idk-lollll
Leon Art💜
(and before y’all ask if the only digital art I’ve made for my books so far is sad: the answer is yes🙂↕️)
this one turned out so good tho😭😭😭
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
That’d be cool! Let me know if you ever start it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
10?
I think?
Maybe 12.
Come to think of it, he might be twelve for the age gap between him and Asher.
Never mind.
I might make them only a year apart because I actually like that better for his arch.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Alright, I will.
Shorter section, but I want to make sure Joseph is making sense and his character is developing well before I post more.
A week passed.
For Joseph, it was a time of raw pain. He had always been shy and quiet, but now he seemed even more so. He seemed older than his years, and…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
no offense to HP fans or any series really
None taken, you’re much less condemning than some people have been and I appreciate that.
You can like whatever the Saxton Haleyou like, as long as it’s not controlling you and it’s not encouraging you to try any stuff (magic, murder, substance abuse, you name it) in the real world. Just don’t…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Uh, I may just have to die on this hill. I really, really need that scene.
It will become clear as soon as the next few scenes are posted.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Yep! He’s an amazing guy! And very chill and funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Just look it up and watch from 2018 to now. They each have a little piece of backstory, if you want to know.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
XD characters have such a great tendency of doing that.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
It’s only evil if someone uses it for evil (and how, exactly, do you do that with Legos, may I ask? Lol)
You leave them on a well traveled floor.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Yeah, it’s funny and I enjoy watching fire, but the actual meaning of the video is too hateful for me. Disney is pretty selfish and pandering, I agree with him. But this guy seems like he has a lot of emotions pent up inside him, and forgot how to care about other humans. I can easily picture him trying to convince children that Frozen i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Okay, okay, he’s making an almost funny jab at things. So, backstory:
most of the time when he tries to do things like speak out against something that Disney did that was really wrong, (like making movies where homosexual relationships are encouraged) or saying that this or that was wrong that so and so did, or anything like that,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
The one you shared is fine. I could see this ending up on one of my playlists. It does have emotion. I just feel like it was a bit on the dramatic side and some of the notes were a little too sharp for this scene. I asked my sister for her thoughts since she doesn’t have a load of Chrono Trigger…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
One question though, how far is this in the book? Are we nearing the end, or does Alan still have some character development to do (maybe sharing this great news with his friends….?)
We are looking at about 7-10 more chapters plus an epilogue. There is one more piece of Alan’s character I still want to develop in this book. This may b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle started the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
HELLO!!!
So excited because today is November and now I can release the beginning of the second book in my saga!
(tagging a few others who might have been reading the first one. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon)
Again, this is in draft form still, so feedback and critiques are welcome.
The Veil of Night
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