Keilah H.

@keilah-h

Sorry, it took me a while to get to that thing, but I finally did!

What you’ve got looks all right. You’re setting up a war and a villain within their own ranks. The prologue does make this more interesting with the old warrior who doesn’t want to be a hero contrasted with his younger self, who is far more eager to fight. Keep it…[Read more]

@keilah-h

In a book like this one it would be up at the top for me. It makes the end fall flat. *shrug*

@rae

Honestly, I don’t remember my initial reaction, you would have to look back at the comments. XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking…[Read more]

@keilah-h

They’ve had good a mock trial and some awesome debate issues in the past (like arguing the death penalty, but you can’t bring in the Bible, only from a logos, ethos, and pathos standpoint)

Sounds good!

@whalekeeper

How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you…

[Read more]

Tags

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore Idk

@keilah-h

“Where’s Felicity at?” I asked, looking around. “She was right here a minute ago. People don’t just disappear.”

lol they’re blind XD

Soldier’s pov was very fun to read btw

@keilah-h

Did you know that today instead of the 25th was originally the day that children got presents? (Personally, I like waiting almost a month for them instead of getting them right away.)

Same.

@koshka

Sure! That sounds fun!

@keilah-h

Felicity

Something hissed behind Felicity, tickling the back of her neck with its cold breath.

“What iss this I’m hearing?”

Felicity spun to see a large, frilled reptilian head peering out at her from the bushes. Well, it was facing her, but its large eyes were closed tight. A large, clawed front leg emerged from the bushes, and t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem.

Be my guest! I just riffed on what I remembered of the characters lol

@keilah-h

none of him home monsters look humanoid, so he might not have a kill reaction, but you bet they will be getting death glares at least. He might be a little protective of Lucy…

@loopylin

Not that your characters would know this, but, just clarifying, the labyrinth doesn’t have an owner. It’s sort of sentient on its own, kinda, and more like a force of nature than anything else.

Yep! I know, but Gabriel most definitely would assume there’s a person behind this, not a bunch of crazy night owl writers lol…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Can you guys describe your characters?

Oh! Yeah I can do that. Barnes is just a tall woman with chopped blonde hair. Wears very old-style clothing from maybe the 40s, a suit in this. Also a white mask with dark eyeholes. Little Lucy is literally the same but without the mask and with even shorter hair.

It’s cool you want to draw this! B…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ok, cool! I didn’t want you to feel abandoned, lol. I will keep role playing until your character have someone else to interact with, though.

@keilah-h

5 is Ayla, Ducktator’s character

@keilah-h WoF is so nostalgic for me ❤️ I love that

@keilah-h

😂 Ah yes, the Wings of Fire prophecy. Glad you like the poem. I would’ve liked to do every character justice but I don’t know their character arcs and whatnot.

@loopylin

Yep that’s correct

@keilah-h I know these ones I think

stanza 1- Felicity. Cuz the white hair

3- Mel

9- the Protector/ Gabriel

10- Lucy/Barnes

@keilah-h

Ohhh i love it! I agree with Ruth, the prologue is 👌👌👌👌🔥🔥

@keilah-h

Felicity

“Whatever you think is best. But we should use stealth. He’s tricky, and as soon as he knows what’s happening, he’ll disappear, I’m sure.”

@keilah-h

Felicity

“Okay, this is going to sound crazy, but I think I saw the imp transform into a rabbit. Maybe. There was a lot going on. But maybe that means he behaves like a rabbit too. We could trap him.”