Keilah H.

@theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22

Silvanis

Once he saw the creature, Silvanis instinctively pushed Fairy behind him. When she tried to step past him, he pushed her back, a pale glow coming to his right hand.

@keilah-h

Ron honestly does sound a smidge cooler in a way. He still has to beat out Crosshair though, who’s held the top spot among my favorite military characters for 5 solid years.

Fair enough. I’ll send you a Ron scene once I have one. For now you’ll have to be satisfied with Jonathan.

@linus-smallprint

 

I read the chapters you posted. P…

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@keilah-h

why are two complete strangers geeking about what makes a proper sniper character from two respective sides of a server. why am I doing this with my life. lol.

OUCH! I thought we were friends! lololol!!! haha!

I still think my sniper wins. He’s not military either. He’s a rebel!!!

@keilah-h

that’s fine with me lol

what’s fine with you? Did I miss something?

Hmm, interesting. Not really the sniper type in my opinion. But I guess they come in all shapes and sizes. lol.

@keilah-h and @stephie

Thank you! Any consecutive feedback or more details on what you liked about it?

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @rae @thearcaneaxiom @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr

hello, for anyone who’s been reading the scenes I’ve been posting, here’s another Jonathan/Jim interaction. Jonathan is now 15, making Jim 27.

It was late one evening. Jonathan sat on his mattress and watched Jim, who was shaving with…

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@rae

It was really good! I liked the scene a lot. I would really like to see the previous scene where the fight/killing happened. It would help straighten out the dialogue. You see, Misty thinks Tenz is wrong, Tenz thinks he;’s right. Roan, (who I don’t think saw much) is loyally siding with his sister. However, we don’t have the actual facts. It…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeppers, we know each other irl. ;] Calvin goes to a sister church’s church plant. Which I guess means he goes to a niece church. @calyhuge what do you think of this term?

@keilah-h @rae

Sniper switched to a gun and aimed into the forest. “Silvanis, how large is this creature, and is there more than one?”

“About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.” Silvanis answered. Dary? Haven’t heard of that place before.

“About this high and this wide.” Fairy showed the size with her hands. “Oh this’ll be a goo…[Read more]

@keilah-h

in a way, we do… we talk about strange things, like family and story characters

@keilah-h

Silvanis

Silvanis  looked again. “About the size of a rat from the planet Dary. Only one.”

At Sniper’s visible confusion, Fairy motioned with her hands. “About this high and this wide.”

Not gonna say anythin’ exact since you have an idea, just know Dary rats are HUGE.

@savannah_grace2009 I have a Tenz scene!

@ellette-Giselle @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @whoever

It’s not that great, so don’t go in expecting much

Tenz brought his knees up to his chest, resting his cheeks on his patella’s, and wrapping his arms around his legs. His large, childish eyes looked from Roan resting on t…

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Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.

@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom

Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.

@ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @grcr @keilah-h @anyone-I-missed Thank you all for your kind words💖 And I’m happy to hear about everyone’s writing progress! <3 And even if your writing progress is slow, don’t worry, everything will come together in God’s perfect timing💖 And everyone will know when Freedom’s Fire is released, don’t worry :3 @whaleke…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Chase scene sounds great.

@rae @keilah-h

 Trevor

As the group proceeded into the forest, Trevor thought he heard something rustling in the leaves, then a twig snapping. “Did anyone else hear that?” Everi, one of the men in the group, asked. We’re being followed. Trevor thought, and a smile crept over his face. “I hear…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h

Perfect! And maybe when they start running for their lives (or fight it, either way) They stumble upon this pavilion place, that was mentioned? Just to keep this going, but it also makes sense if the other group finds that

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @freed_and_redeemed

Btw, I thought I’d tag a few people and mention that I’ve been sketching characters if anyone is interested. I started the forum here.

Character Sketches

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@grcr

Thank you! Yes, the characters are from the prologue and Chapter I shared. As for quotes, I actually don’t find it hard to come up with them at all. I just th9ink of the characters and the quotes come.

@freed_and_redeemed

Freedom’s Fire, which also features Riker/Leon as the MCs, is set to hopefully publish this Summer 👀

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@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @rae

When you plan to RP and then get slapped by life….

😭So sorry guys

I’ll be gone for the next two weeks, but I’ll try to do a quick one

Mind if I throw in an animal chase or something?

EVERI

The man named Sniper led them towards the forest, leaving half the group behind. Everi far preferred this op…[Read more]