Keilah H.

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Full honesty, I started this WIP maybe a couple months ago, so it’s not very far along yet worldbuilding-wise🤣. These are all things I’m going to have to work out. Thanks for mentioning them, because it makes things so much easier when I can have some kind of list of things to tweak or change.

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Wow! Thanks for the great advice! (And the more critiquing the better. it really does help)

To answer your question, yes, Quelin is definitely going to be a big part of the story. As for the whole thing about the thumbs, the Felisaro had to be extremely inventive to get past that. They basically started out with…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

@keilah-h

Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Elissa

The man turned to her the second she spoke, giving her a smile. “Ah, I do not believe I have had the pleasure.” He then bowed with the same smile on his face. “I am Colonel James Matthew Hitchens of the Royal British Army, madam.”

He seemed… fine, but seeing how Feather and Crosshair had reacted and the thi…[Read more]

@loopylin

Heres my characters entry! @keilah-h if you dont mind I might borrow some of your questions 😀

Mike: Aright! Here is the next two people , Sam Smith and this stunning lady, Jean Walton!

Jean: *Laughs* Im not stunning. (So all of you guys know, Jean is a really pretty person)

Sam: *Clenches his fists and sighs deeply* I already hate…[Read more]

@keilah-h @freedomwriter76

(I’ve barely met Hitchens and he’s already making me mad)

Elissa

Elissa looked back and forth at Crosshair and the other man getting increasingly closer as they argued. She didn’t understand most of what they were saying but could tell there was some history.

Elissa was about to speak up when Feather stepped in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I relate to the crumb phobia so much… lol

@joy-calle

Hey, I’m an INFP too! Although technically I border on INFJ; half the time I get the one, half the other XD

@keilah-h

Thanks!

And wow, that’s a great idea! I’ve read both Warriors and Wings of Fire (up until… a certain point? I don’t know how long they’ll keep going…), but never thought of actually doing it myself. Thanks again for the awesome idea! I will definitely get to work on that. If I ever post it, I’ll definitely tag you! 😃

@freedomwriter76

Oops, Aliens autocorrected to Allies. That’s the thing I’m most sensitive to in movies. Ok, good to know! Yeah, maybe one day I’ll watch them. I’ve never seen a marvel movie in my life so… same as other marvel movies doesn’t help me a whole lot XD

Ok I like that they let you figure out Bucky’s backstory instead of just showing…[Read more]

@keilah-h

XD Good one! Well he might be shocked that he goes from being a humble boi living underground to rescuing people and becoming a dad, but he thankfully doesn’t die. XD I would never!

@freedomwriter76

I’ll be sure to share it when I finish it!!! 😀

Okay!! Thank you!! Can’t wait! 😀

@keilah-h

Yay, a redemption arc!

Yess!!! I love redemption arcs 😁

@felicity

*nervous gasp* I really hope Asher is ok!! Great scene though, girl!!!

Yeah me too 😬. He will be! Aww thanks girl!! 💖💖💖

I feel like we haven’t talked in forever!! I’ve m…[Read more]

@keilah-h

XD thanks! idk what it is, I was just messing around and seeing what the results would be lol

@thearcaneaxiom @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else

Alright! For anyone who wants to read, this is chapter 2 of Healer. It introduces a couple of my favorite characters. This is definitely open to critique, as I want to see what readers think of it. Sometimes the writer can’t see flaws, or even strengths, in their…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Milo

With a huff, Milo settled himself on the floor as Elissa and Feather went into the room to take care of Simon. Crosshair and the other man were still standing by the door and Cammie was sitting against the opposite wall. Beth sat beside her, eyeing the door of the room with a worried look. Milo sighed and closed his eyes, letting…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings (Min still wants us to tag her for things, right? Even though she’s busy?)

I think it would be easier to write what Silvia does from my own characters’ points of view instead of from her pov

Ellie

Allen and Layson stumbled through the room supporting a half-conscious Serin between them. May…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Girl…girl…GIRL!!!!!!

I…I…I…

I JUST CRIED OVER VANCE!!!!!!!!!

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Girl!!! You did?!? Ahhh!!! As I writer, that makes me so happy!!! But as your friend…😭😭😭 I’m sorry girl!!

And AHH I know!!! Now I can’t think of him without getting sad and trying not to cry 😭😭

I’m just trying hard NOT to picture h…[Read more]