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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.
I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.
Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yay! Leon and Riker working together! I love it!
As for triggers, Riker, I believe, would avoid guns and the sounds of gunshots. I have a neighbor with PTSD from serving and his wife asks us not to shoot anything more than air rifles or bows and other quiet things because the boom of a gunshot can trigger him. Maybe Riker…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@grcr Aw, love it!!
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Lol. Whaley tagged me @rar and Ellette tagged me @ rea
This is very amusing.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔
Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD
Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀
Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?
When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
XD. I like that.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Kefa replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I would like my hawk to be a male, and as for age, it is hard to come up with an age, so I will just say he is an young adult.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Marcellus, Flare, Leon, and Julian, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel, I think. Elderstrand edge.
Yay. A storm. Brutus felt an unintentional rise in his powers, formulating itself as a barrier of wind around him. Brutus…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I love practically every animal, but my tie for first place has to be penguins, red foxes, and red tail hawks, So I think I will go with a red tail hawk!
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Rosemary and Jirah, (Elderstand w/ Rina)
Rosemary threw the crystal, and watched as it flew through the air, she saw it hit the ground, and all the men in battle were on the other side of the wall. Rosemary turned and ran to the boat, she jumped on just as it began to sail away. “What was your plan?!” Jirah yelled at Rosemary. “I wished…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah, thats fair.
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Kefa replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh thanks! I would love some help with animal charries!
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @ellette-giselle
I would be fine with combining are groups! I think the crystal explosion Rosemary caused would be a good reason for them to meet, maybe they would notice the giant crystal spikes suddenly burst into the sky. I don’t know, just an idea.
Also my thing probably wasn’t clear enough.…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @elette-giselle @the_lost-journal
Soooo…. are we combining our groups, or staying separate? I’m not really sure what’s going on. If so, who’s joining ours (Sara, Marcel, Ellis, & Felicity)?
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Rosemary and Jirah (Elderstand river w/ Rina)
Jirah immediately jumped onto the platform with Rina, and then turned to see what Rosemary was doing. “Rosemary, we need to hurry!” He shouted. “Yes, but we also can’t trust everyone we meet!” Rosemary called back from the shore. “I-I am not going!” She yelled. “We have to! We do not have any…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
ooooh, ok!
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