Keilah H.

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!

@savannah_grace2009

Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.

@linus-smallprint

btw, why isn’t the new Alan in your art collection?!?

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Well, the deadline is passed, so I think I’m gonna judge the three stories that were submitted.

in particular order……

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@linus-smallprint

COME ON YOU TWO! SHUT UP AND GET OUT OF THERE!

Okay Linus, now I’m mad.

I KNEW IT! I knew he was going to try to convince Alan to go back to magic, I just didn’t know why, or that it was such a big deal!

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Dang, I miss taking Latin now

@whalekeeper

Just curious, what curriculum are you taking? Do you use the Familia Romana book?

@savannah_grace2009

I’m sorry you’re going through that. I’ll be praying for her and your family ❤️

Glad to hear that you had a good holiday despite it though

@whalekeeper Oh yeah I forgot about that! I haven’t listened to it

@whalekeeper

I’m a bit rusty, but the first line, since breaths is plural, should be “Spiritūs sunt videre difficilis”

I’m not sure about the second line because the vocabulary is unfamiliar, but it seems off. Just make sure the verb is in the imperative case. I can’t tell if it is or not.

Also, I think “ramos” needs to be “ramōs”.

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and 238…

and 239

Go to page 240 of the Character Party RP…and scroll to the bottom….ahhhhhh I can’t believe I did that *cries*

@trailblazer

Oh that sounds so hard :/

Thank you so much!!! <3

How have you been???

@rae

For all the new ppl looking into Character Party, you should find the part where the castle was burning down, the queen was almost killed, the villains were running rampant, the charries were squabbling and Prince Fennin was trying to hold everything together…cuz I think that was our most chaotic masterpiece. Or you could try and find the e…

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@jonas

Some of my fondest memories of KP are from the Character Party RP. (If you’re newer and don’t know what that is, I will link it below.) It had a good run, but eventually, it fizzled out and died

I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THAT

Like we had a BLAST

Oh my goodnesss

Do we still have that google doc where we copied and pasted it all???