Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

Great! Yeah, I thought it was a really cool way to detail the narrative and make Sara’s voice distinct. I’m glad it doesn’t feel too distracting. Now to be more consistent with it 🤔😂

@hybridlore

First off,  @whalekeeper had an amazing suggestion for Cole and Sara! Love that!

Second, I like the synesthesia. It’s interesting and I don’t really know much about it so I feel like i’m uncovering something new as I read. I may be the odd number on this, but I personally enjoy it.

how about you, @linus-smallprint ?

@whalekeeper

You’re good! XD

Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)

I think I understand what you were trying to say, and I love that idea! A scene is starting to form in my head already 😅 The only problem is, I’ll have to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

interesting, I’ll check it out! And yeah, the original jurassic park was a billion times darker! they killed a baby and a ton of different children in that one! in the movie, no kids die! plus the characters have morals! (in the book they are a bunch of self centered jerks who would probably push a child towards a raptor to…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’d say The Princess Bride was a tie.

@keilah-h

Jurassic Park is a book?

@whalekeeper

Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.

Thank you so much for the feedback! Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unrealistic cliche dystopian. I wanted the reader to be able to see why the government was this way, and for the gra…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’m sorry, that sounds really hard. You were able to find a doctor that seemed like she knew what she was doing, right? Have they been able to figure out different ways to help you?

Yeah, it can be hard, but most of the time it’s not too bad. Same. Mine’s more guilt/compulsive thoughts. Mainly just enhanced anxiety, but i…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax laughed, he enjoyed the conversation between an ignorant fish person and two twins who barely agreed on anything. Ben was also enjoying the conversation from the background.

Rax spoke up, “Syph, how about you just watch this time around.”

@ellette-giselle oh sorry I forgot about that! Eddie would’ve loved to go with Rory, but she’s also the type to jump at the opportunity to go with any guy

@koshka @raxforge

The Twins 

Ellie rolled her eyes.

“Don’t let her scare you,” she said to Syph. “You don’t need a partner. You can just show up. You don’t even need to dance. You could…[Read more]

@koshka

Mexican explosive addict who is an undead skeleton kind of trouble

@hybridlore

I’m in Sunrise Peak as well!

Yeah, i guess so 🤷🏻‍♀️

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Thanks ladies!!

I’m kinda nervous to submit it, but idk why 🫣😂

Can I cause trouble with a new charrie? Pleeeeaase

@keilah-h

Not true! It is like 95% of the time the movie is worse than the book, but here are two examples of the movie being better:

The Princess bride,

And Jurassic Park.

@whalekeeper

Honestly, their economic system makes no sense. They just have infinite money???

@whalekeeper

Yes! It’s back!

My love of dance has influenced my attitude toward critique a lot. It’s taught me to want corrections. One thing my favorite ballet teacher always says is that listening to your corrections is the best way to improve, and I’ve heard variations of this from the other teachers as well. The aforementioned favorite…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh wow, you’re an adult now. Yeah, paperwork, insurance, college, taxes, a job…good luck! XD

@hybridlore

Thank you girl! Yeah, basically. It’s a lot more than that though. Pretty much about a year ago, I realized I was never going to get better if I kept letting my parents take care of my health (my mom has been helping me with my health via vitamins and stuff she found online for about 5 years after multiple Doctors said I had no cure).…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Aw, I’m sorry!! I’ve been praying for you. Is it the health stuff, or just everything?

I’m doing pretty good. I still struggle with my OCD a bit, but for the most part it’s better. I do still have bad days though.

Okay. What time zone are you in? I believe the next one will be at 11 EST, but I guess that still counts…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yeah! It’s not too late, if you’re not too busy for March!

@ellette-giselle

Ahh, yeah. That would explain it