Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

You should be able to get in. My brother’s classmate does not have a google account, and he and my brother were still able to work on a doc together.

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m so glad.

@ellette-giselle

Either way, honestly. Whatever works.

I think it might still let you in, but I don’t know if you’ll be able to comment. I guess we’ll have to see. I’ll email you the link.

@ellette-giselle

Wow.

I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.

Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.

I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!

I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…

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@hybridlore

So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?

Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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@loopylin

Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.

@loopylin

I’ll jump on board any time.

Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.

@the_lost-journal

Lololol. Thanks. 😂

I might have to take a look.

@keilah-h

Thanks. I might!

@hybridlore

I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭

Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣

I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.

@rae @the_lost-journal

Should the rabbit lead Mel and Barnes back to your characters, or not yet?

I also miss this role play. Would people be interested in continuing now that it’s summer?

@jonas @rae @raxforge

@keilah-h

Felicity

Felicity hesitantly took the scaley handshake. For the moment, she was at a loss for words. She took a few steps back and looked around at the maze walls that still surrounded them.

“I need… we need to get out of here.” She eyed each of her companions carefully, pausing a moment to look at Huntress’ stripes. Before, she had…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s okay. Sorry I keep nagging you, but… I feel justified. I’ve had to wait on that ending for about five days.

@linus-smallprint

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥

@keilah-h

dang that’s dark

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.

Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]