Keilah H.

@highscribeofaetherium

True. We could name him Great Googly Moogly. That’s screamable, even though it’s long.

@linus-smallprint

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Oh, I will bother you for chapters. Don’t encourage me. haha

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thank you so much! This is very helpful.

Yes, I will definitely talk to the boys (my brothers) about this, though they are a lot younger then Aaron and Turin, so it might be different for them, (right?)

Thanks again so much for taking the time to write all this out and explain it! This is totally going to help so much!

I…[Read more]

@rae

I love it!

@highscribeofaetherium

We could nickname him Cud.

@linus-smallprint

Great. So far I’ve been reading through and I think I’m on chapter seven…. ? I’ve been jotting down notes as I go. i don’t know if you’re interested in them or not.

Did you see the newest LTBL section I posted?

@highscribeofaetherium

ACK! Someone go deal with whatever is eating the pictures!!!

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m going to see if I can post a picture.

@highscribeofaetherium

And eating up beautiful characters deserves a wicked name!!

@highscribeofaetherium

correct. Wyoh had just been banished.

@rae

Yep, highscribe is right. It’s also too friendly. I mean, how dare they eat our pictures!!! This needs to be a horrible terrible villain who is completely depraved and the worst of all master villains because he chews up beautiful characters before THEY EVER SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY!!!!

How about Diablo or Viper!

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, two things. I would suggest reading this scene out-loud, because there were a few sentences that felt a little jarring and out of flow with the rest. They just needed a different word arrangement or different punctuation.

The other thing would be a suggestion, and that would be this. When Leon is running toward the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Awesome!

@savannah_grace2009 Thank youuuuuuu. and yes, Riker deals with a lot of trouble😅😅

@ellette-giselle You can add any comments if desired!

@grcr Thx, girl 💖

@whalekeeper It’s….complicated😅 Reading Freedom’s Fire helps explain it, but basically….

Leon/Aadelheide were taken from the Ghetto, put in a truck, and were delivered to the camp (though Leon/Aadelheide didn’t know about the camp yet) but the driver of the truck…[Read more]

btw, the image is just a random one I found

We need a name for the new KP ghost!

This is my suggestion

(Click on the words to follow the link)

@theshadow

Usually when I write rivals, they end up falling in love, but I try to help.

What kind of rivals? Mortal enemies? Very competitive? I insulted you once and you insulted me back and now it’s a thing?

PICTURES ARE GONE AGAIN???? WOE IS ME! *collapses dramatically*